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This was really amazing. I have to say you're one of the best authors I've ever read here on fictionpress. Keep up the excellent work!
This was really amazing. I have to say you're one of the best authors I've ever read here on fictionpress. Keep up the excellent work!
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My god, this was brilliantly written. I am seriously in awe at the way you write, just the general flow of it. A little word to the wise though, when you toss in words like "chunk" it does kinda screw up the feeling of flowing tears that you're trying to portray, just a comment. Overall though, I'm really impressed, I will definitely read some of your other stuff...
65ContinuationMy god, this was brilliantly written. I am seriously in awe at the way you write, just the general flow of it. A little word to the wise though, when you toss in words like "chunk" it does kinda screw up the feeling of flowing tears that you're trying to portray, just a comment. Overall though, I'm really impressed, I will definitely read some of your other stuff...