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11/27/2006 c1 D. Rochelle
Beautiful. Powerful imagery. My only issue is that in some places it doesn't flow quite as nicely as it does in others, but a poignant piece nonetheless.

Seraph
11/13/2006 c1 463All Alone With Her Thoughts
I love this piece. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the review!

~Rowan~
11/12/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Oh, that is simply wonderful. I love using hands as a metaphor, as the narrator in a situation. The little examples you've given are really nice. I like the example of punching Timmy because he called you "poophead." That's so real, and that's really nice to see. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

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