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11/13/2006 c1 crazy dog events
It's too choppy for my taste. It sounds like one of those voicovers for bad techno music. I mean, cool, you know how to rhyme, but that's pretty much all this poem proves. (I'm in such a bad mood. Sorry.)

UHm, in the summary? The correct word is condescension.
11/13/2006 c1 463All Alone With Her Thoughts
To me, this doesn't really seem like apoem, but more like a long list of words. i think this would make an amazing piece if you expanded on it. But, I must say, I like the idea. So, yeah, for sure expand. Good luck!


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