for Pouring Away2/2/2007 c1 
26lucretiabaine
Aww, so clever and adorable! I love the tension and the meanings behind the descriptions. Great work.
LXF
26lucretiabaineAww, so clever and adorable! I love the tension and the meanings behind the descriptions. Great work.
LXF
1/14/2007 c1 Ahemait
Very interesting and differetn, but i liked it all the same. Great ending. I'm jealous of your endings! (not that that doesnt sound weird...) they're always very good. Great job, keep writing.
Very interesting and differetn, but i liked it all the same. Great ending. I'm jealous of your endings! (not that that doesnt sound weird...) they're always very good. Great job, keep writing.
11/27/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
yikes, very insightful. I'm glad that the person in this poem got up the courage to walk away. Very powerful but almost painful in it's intensity.
89Lady DreamWriteryikes, very insightful. I'm glad that the person in this poem got up the courage to walk away. Very powerful but almost painful in it's intensity.
11/16/2006 c1 I Found Myself At 24
Hey Hun! Good to see you posting again! This was a really good piece - nice style and flow to it. I'm not sure I understand why she walked away in the end, but I love this just the same! ^_^
Hey Hun! Good to see you posting again! This was a really good piece - nice style and flow to it. I'm not sure I understand why she walked away in the end, but I love this just the same! ^_^
11/14/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Hey, I loved this! I was wondering if you would start writing again. I love how you put in the undertones, what everyone was thing and what they were doing. Beautifully done.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserHey, I loved this! I was wondering if you would start writing again. I love how you put in the undertones, what everyone was thing and what they were doing. Beautifully done.
Keep it up.
11/14/2006 c1 14D. A. Emme
I liked this. The ending was great! ^-^ This is a really nice piece of work. Keep up the great work!
14D. A. EmmeI liked this. The ending was great! ^-^ This is a really nice piece of work. Keep up the great work!
11/14/2006 c1 71Basnirka amaterka
More of a prose than poetry but very good, easy to read; with a nice athosphere.
71Basnirka amaterkaMore of a prose than poetry but very good, easy to read; with a nice athosphere.