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11/14/2006 c1 EtherealSweet
I liked it alot Brittany! :D

Interesting topic choice. Totally immerses you into the story itself! Almost wanted to twitch about the blood. I bet you're teacher will love it!
11/14/2006 c1 Walrus
:D I like it hunnums :-* and it finished just like you said! :D hehe. I love you :D Im sure your teacher will love it :-* I am proud of you Brit, I hope you're happy with it :D
11/14/2006 c1 7Purpurn Jellybean
Wow. I really liked it. The details are great and the story is almost haunting. But, it never once failed to keep my eyes from wandering. I just had to keep reading. :D

The only things I noticed: you switch back and forth between tenses, you wrote Sandy instead of Sally 33 paragraphs down, and yeah, that's about it. I LOVED IT SO MUCH, BERTNY! Very well written. :D :D Good job.

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