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12/30/2006 c1 46ThreePac
It is good. Your language is real good. When I write things I find myself not having a very large vocab, but I like your vocab. It sounds very professional. It reminds me of the game Myst a little bit, where Achenar and Sirrus are trapped. This guy in your story seems trapped to me, like a princess being trapped in a tower of a dragon's castle, or the Beast being lonely and hidden in his palace in Beauty and the Beast. So this guy's tolerance for the pills is basically a mental thing because the pills dont do a lot for him. But mentally he feels better when he takes them, sort of like an addiction. Cool, it is cool. Dave

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