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5/6/2007 c2 6Tomiko90
Wow!

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet! This is beautiful! Of course, ALL your work is beautiful. While I read it, different pictures came into my mind. And I could feel the emotion of it! Very well done! :D
4/30/2007 c2 Jamster131
I love it! Ha ur great! all my fictions, i wrote one word and they went kapow! lol. i mean like bye bye.
4/18/2007 c2 2She Is Legend
emotions and thoughts are described well in the story, nice plot line
4/12/2007 c1 11The White Angel of Darkness
Usually, I don't write so many rewiews at the same author, but I got addicted when I read the first two poems at the top...

I Loved this one, all dramatic and sad and broody.
3/4/2007 c1 pinkbrezzagrl
hey that is pretty good and was very weel put together.
1/11/2007 c1 polyphonic spree
Wow... that's really sad... and so DEEP!

It's sad how they died and he went to hell... because he killed his Dad, who was a VERY bad father, and she's in Heaven and they're separated.

Very well written! I love it!

I'll probably go check out some of your other stories too =]

-Teresa
12/13/2006 c1 2a horrendous book
i love this!
12/9/2006 c1 6Tomiko90
Holy shizz! I love this one! How can you come up with such awesome writing? ghaa! I don't know what else to say besides I LOVE IT!
11/15/2006 c1 8Sophia Victoria
InsanePhoenix,

Keep it up,that's nice...:)

Yours forever in Death's cold pallor,

x/o Yami

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