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2/11/2007 c1 102Midnight In Eden
Nice little haiku. One thing, when working within the constraints of haiku, I always feel that the language has to be so carefully selected as each word counts. With that in mind, perhaps there might be two better adjectives than "heavy" and "sweet"?

Otherwise, you've got a cute idea.

.:midnight:.
11/30/2006 c1 19Awen1923
Nicely written. A sad image, though.
11/17/2006 c1 322Basara
somehow patient...

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