for raining sunsets1/9/2007 c1 
2sicklysnowwhite
see the silhouette on the horizon
pitch black trees
burned crisp
by the sunlight
falling to ashes
from the storm clouds
that i love. very visually tasteful. going on favs.
2sicklysnowwhitesee the silhouette on the horizon
pitch black trees
burned crisp
by the sunlight
falling to ashes
from the storm clouds
that i love. very visually tasteful. going on favs.
12/9/2006 c1 1capriciousguy
i love how in the beginning your looking through the window and then your outside, and i adore how you discribed the clouds crying because they missed the sun. nd i find it amazing how you leave us feeling so empty at the end and feeling so alone. i miss the beams of radiance! i miss them!
1capriciousguyi love how in the beginning your looking through the window and then your outside, and i adore how you discribed the clouds crying because they missed the sun. nd i find it amazing how you leave us feeling so empty at the end and feeling so alone. i miss the beams of radiance! i miss them!
11/21/2006 c1 The Intelligent Designer
Leaves you with a feel of like, peace man...nice I liked it, very pretty.
Leaves you with a feel of like, peace man...nice I liked it, very pretty.
11/19/2006 c1 7Calliope Veronica
Your poem has potential, but a few times you changed the verb tenses. You went from "I watched" to "I'm watching",and it would have been better if you were consistant.
.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.
7Calliope VeronicaYour poem has potential, but a few times you changed the verb tenses. You went from "I watched" to "I'm watching",and it would have been better if you were consistant.
.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.