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8/31/2010 c1 34Black Sparrow
I like the metaphor of the black oblivion that you used and your reference to a fairy tale world, with a Prince Charming and a happily ever after. Then followed by the blunt revelation of the truth...

Great wording and crafting. Well done.
4/20/2009 c1 59A Rose in Weeds
AMamazing. i loved the line "Prince Charming was taken out back and shot in memory of you". so very very poetic and heartfelt. Keep writing.
4/15/2007 c1 2Lotuss Tears
lol This would make a great song if you added a couple more verses ;]

Love how you take those fairy tale elements and reduce them to very bleak things.

Good stuff!

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