11/26/2006 c1 2Eternally Eris
Argh! I can't believe I forgot to review your other story. I neglected poor Scarlett and Tristan! I should go do that...

But this story! Ohh, it's really, really promising. I LOVE Wiccan lore, Celtic designed, and mythology! Seriously, those are three of my very favorite things that you've just managed to combine into a very promising beginning. I must say, the writing style seems more mature than Finish Me Off somehow. Maybe it's just me... But I think it's the great details and more serious topic. The way you described everything involving the box was perfect, created a brilliant picture in my mind. And I liked the mention of the moon, that had an impact on me since I adore the moon. Pandora's Box has always intrigued me. I'm excited to see your take of the story. And Charlotte being possessed, as I'm guessing she was, with the white eyes... hmm, yeah, liked that part. And then the rose ending up in her hands... Is the image of the rose still on the box? Did it leave the box and become real? Or something along those lines anyways... But yes, lovely beginning and I'm excited to read more. How was your Thanksgiving? And how've you been since I last talked to you? It's been a while... Junior year's gotten me so out of the loop of everything. My AP classes are killing me. I need to find more time to write. But right, to sum this up, MAGNIFICENT as always, and I can't wait to see chapter 2!

11/22/2006 c1 kbxyz912345
Hey, good story. Intense and a bit frightening. But hey, what about Finish Me Off? You can't abandon that yet. I know you are writing the chapter which we have all been very PATIENTLY waiting for...But I can't say too much because I am starting a new short story for the holiday myself. And I haven't updated in a while either, so I can understand. Happy Thanksgiving!