for Fallen Leaves11/25/2006 c1 
7Atheneon
O, very good. Wow, that sounds like the poetic first paragraph of a nineteenth century british novel. Shivers. Sounds like something you should read under a huge oak tree on top of a hill, or next to a fireplace with a rich cup of jasmine tea.
7AtheneonO, very good. Wow, that sounds like the poetic first paragraph of a nineteenth century british novel. Shivers. Sounds like something you should read under a huge oak tree on top of a hill, or next to a fireplace with a rich cup of jasmine tea.
11/23/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
Absolutely beautiful! I love this piece! The imagry is incredibly vivid and your writing almost seems alive. The lines, "before dropping towards the murky bottom to gather
algae, reminiscent of some long forgotten wreckage that not even the fish seem to take note of anymore." This poem is amazing, I'm adding it to my favorites. Definatley keep writing.
Absolutely beautiful! I love this piece! The imagry is incredibly vivid and your writing almost seems alive. The lines, "before dropping towards the murky bottom to gather
algae, reminiscent of some long forgotten wreckage that not even the fish seem to take note of anymore." This poem is amazing, I'm adding it to my favorites. Definatley keep writing.
11/20/2006 c1 21bunnyrabbit228
I really like this poem. It sort of reminds me of HD's The pear tree. The poem is a lovely picture of serenity and peace. It has great detail and an exhillarating use of simlie and metaphor. Nice work.
-bunnyrabbit228
21bunnyrabbit228I really like this poem. It sort of reminds me of HD's The pear tree. The poem is a lovely picture of serenity and peace. It has great detail and an exhillarating use of simlie and metaphor. Nice work.
-bunnyrabbit228