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12/19/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Cool metaphor. I've never seen anyone compare love to ice cream before, and this was nice. The way you've played with sound in this - whether it was intentional or not - is also nice, with the "k" sound at the end of "thick," "sick," "lick," and "weak." That's very nice. Great work. Keep writing! :)

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