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9/26/2018 c23 Trinity Cat 172
I know that I'm so late to this but i have to say it, "THANK. YOU!" This masterpiece you wrote is just so good that I can't describe all the positive warm feelings I have for this. you need to get this published because if you don't it would be such a waste. you got a new mission write a book, publish and send me a copy because damn mate you have earned my eternal respect!

Yours Truly, Trinity Cat 172. it's the same tag on Xbox, Spotify, Steam and of course Fictionpress!
8/24/2015 c1 Guest
You got barns and nobles from a game.
10/23/2014 c16 Tbird2290
I'm kind of dissapionted in Kate at this point. Her rejecting Cain thinking he can't change is just as bad as him thinkin all those bad people can't change. He didn't give them a chance and neither did she.

But you are infact an amazing story teller! You have a true writing gift and it's extravagant! I kindof have a feeling she's gonna end up killing Cain but if I can still bring myself to Finnish I will comment. Best of luck!
10/24/2012 c23 Syco
good read a few to many big words i thought but over all a good read
4/20/2012 c23 6Cazie
You really need to publish it! I'll definately buy it! :)
11/16/2010 c23 Amanda
You're story was AMAZING! I've never read anything like it. Oh my goodness i ended up reading it all in one sitting (instead of doing my homework lol)

But seriously I want to take your story and permanently memorize it!
10/3/2010 c23 mangoxckik
Ah ^-^ I finally finished your story. Overall I think you're a brilliant writer and this story was a good idea. One question I have though is why did Zekes mom still hate Kate? I mean she freakin killed Cain and god brought her back to life, so why hate her? (: But anyway thanks for writing this story ill be sure to read your others and review. Ciao (;
10/2/2010 c9 mangoxckik
I absolutely love this story. If you're not already then you could be a great author publishing and selling your books. I can't wait to read more of your stories after this one. ciao (:
10/2/2010 c1 mangoxckik
I'm very picky about stories I read most of the time, but so far after reading the first chapter of this i'm pretty hooked. You're a very good writer. Ill keep you updated on what I think of the rest. ciao (:
11/30/2009 c19 1mpookiew
I love the story! I also think that there are really interesting concepts- great thinking! Another thing I liked was where you said that Zeke's kisses didn't make her feel the same as Cain's but they were really so that made them good.
11/23/2009 c1 mpookiew
It sounds good so far. I am excited to read the rest!
10/21/2009 c23 8Written
I read this story up to a point a long while back, but I had to stop because Cain was freaking me out a little too much. He just seemed like bad news, what can I say? haha. Anyway, I decided to give it another try, and I loved it! I think it's fascinating how you explore different topics, the human soul, good and evil, etc. Your stories have a certain depth to them, and I'm really impressed by that.

Some parts seemed a little rushed, like Zeke liking her, but I guess I could see it happening. I liked that you gave him a personality of sorts that made him stand out, but somehow that aspect of the story was still a little forgettable to me, though it was certainly sweet in it's own way.

I also liked how you explored the different friendships and relationships, especially with her mom. this was a really touching story. have you ever read knittingkneedle's "the last summer"? in some ways, in reminded me of this piece, though her heroine doesn't get a second chance at life.

Keep writing! You really are fab.
8/4/2009 c1 1Annabelle Reaver
Wow. First chapter and I like it so far. I can kind of relate to Kate. My mom's the same way. But I do have a bit of a temper and a smart mouth, so we're even. I like how no one seems to fit into the usual stereotypes, too. Her friends definitely sound interesting... onto the other chapters!
5/21/2009 c23 5ChimericalWrites
OMG I love this story. I just spent all day reading it cuz i couldn't stop until i finished. and i love Zeke he is most definitley my favorite character.
4/5/2009 c23 1Purple Uranium
Wow. This story was very intense. I wasn't sure what to expect when I first stumbled upon it, but it certainly wasn't this. I cried a whole lot reading this story, especially towards the end in those last eight or so chapters. I was like an emotional roller coaster, really.

You did very well with this story. You created so many ups and downs, strengths and flaws in your characters. There were times when I adored Kate and times when I just wondered why the hell she was being so weak-willed... but that always faded because then she would turn right around and do something that impressed me. The same went for Kate's friends. I think I was most disappointed about the path Cain went down because I felt so bad for him at first; it's hard not to pity him, especially the way his words were twisted to make him seem like such a tortured soul. But he was really the way that everyone made him out to be. That was sad, but appropriate, and you wrote that exceedingly well.

The only thing I'm curious about is why Zeke's mom hates Kate so much. She did what the Sevenfold wanted her to do, shouldn't she be happy? And that little boy did not die and he wasn't paralyzed, so what's the problem? I'm assuming it has something to do with the fact that she now carries Cain's burder or something... his curse was rebounded onto her once she killed him, but if that's the case then she would have been well aware of that fact, considering she wanted Kate to kill him in the first place. Or maybe its because Zeke was almost killed on account of Kate... either way, that just confuses me, but its still an interesting dynamic to end the story on. And it had such a sweet ending even if it wasn't all love and rainbows.

All in all, this was an awesome story. Great job.
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