for Attempts at eloquence2/12/2009 c4 
3The True Dreamer
These were all really great too! And I really loved the discriptions...I think I like the last two the best, but overall they were all really good! Nice work!
3The True DreamerThese were all really great too! And I really loved the discriptions...I think I like the last two the best, but overall they were all really good! Nice work!
2/3/2009 c4 2WVS
These are all pretty good. I liked the last two poems and the paragraph about sunrise. The one about the seasons was quite different, not as much descriptions as I thought but it was still good, they still reminded me of the seasons they represented.
2WVSThese are all pretty good. I liked the last two poems and the paragraph about sunrise. The one about the seasons was quite different, not as much descriptions as I thought but it was still good, they still reminded me of the seasons they represented.
7/22/2008 c1 1HIme1221
This is no longer an attempt at eloquence...you've achieved it. Congrats.
X-hime1221
1HIme1221This is no longer an attempt at eloquence...you've achieved it. Congrats.
X-hime1221
4/29/2008 c2 2Autumn's Attic
you're such a good descriptive writer...:) its nice to find description on here, most people just gloss over the description and stuff to fit in more sotry...:D hats off!
2Autumn's Atticyou're such a good descriptive writer...:) its nice to find description on here, most people just gloss over the description and stuff to fit in more sotry...:D hats off!
4/28/2008 c2 3Elouise82
Beautiful descriptions! You paint very vivid word pictures; I can almost see the scene before me as I read. Very lovely imagery, both on the sunrise and the seasons.
3Elouise82Beautiful descriptions! You paint very vivid word pictures; I can almost see the scene before me as I read. Very lovely imagery, both on the sunrise and the seasons.
11/13/2007 c2 8Barbados
Winter was my favorite here, by far. All of winter was awesome.
This piece reminds me of one of my favorite writers, Morgan Llewelyn.
Very nice. :)
8BarbadosWinter was my favorite here, by far. All of winter was awesome.
This piece reminds me of one of my favorite writers, Morgan Llewelyn.
Very nice. :)
11/13/2007 c1 Barbados
That was quite nice. I espeically liked the part about the pink of a rose in the height of its bloom.
On a side note, I think Emmy needs help. :P Actually I thought her review was hilarious, especially the bbqlol part.
Anyway. Well done here. I'm going to go check out Seasons.
That was quite nice. I espeically liked the part about the pink of a rose in the height of its bloom.
On a side note, I think Emmy needs help. :P Actually I thought her review was hilarious, especially the bbqlol part.
Anyway. Well done here. I'm going to go check out Seasons.
10/5/2007 c1 4S.L. Michaels
Very descriptive. You definitely painted a picture with your words here. I could almost feel the sunrise. It was like I was actually watching it.
Kudos!
4S.L. MichaelsVery descriptive. You definitely painted a picture with your words here. I could almost feel the sunrise. It was like I was actually watching it.
Kudos!
1/10/2007 c1 14SirWade
That was so pretty. I wish I could write with so much description! I have a hard time with that part of writing! Back to this I loved it! It was just...well, beautiful!
14SirWadeThat was so pretty. I wish I could write with so much description! I have a hard time with that part of writing! Back to this I loved it! It was just...well, beautiful!
12/19/2006 c1 16Giallolino
Thanks for the review.
This piece is beautiful. It cries out imagery and I love it. Your tone is romantic and soft like Emerson or Thoreau. I am just awed by this piece. Great job!
16GiallolinoThanks for the review.
This piece is beautiful. It cries out imagery and I love it. Your tone is romantic and soft like Emerson or Thoreau. I am just awed by this piece. Great job!
12/13/2006 c1 Irony Illuminator
That was simply beautiful. Very short, but really, that was all you needed. Eloquent. Short, sweet, and to the point. Wonderful.
-I.I.
That was simply beautiful. Very short, but really, that was all you needed. Eloquent. Short, sweet, and to the point. Wonderful.
-I.I.
11/23/2006 c1 2Emmy
ZOMG FLAMEWAR!#?11fortytwo OMGWTFBBQLOL?
Um…anyway…
You did a great job on this. Excellent use of imagery. I really like it. It reminds me of something I’ve read before that I liked, but I can’t remember what. Hmm… Oh, well. I’m sure I’ll think of it eventually. I’ll tell you when I remember.
You should post more on your account!
~Emmy
2EmmyZOMG FLAMEWAR!#?11fortytwo OMGWTFBBQLOL?
Um…anyway…
You did a great job on this. Excellent use of imagery. I really like it. It reminds me of something I’ve read before that I liked, but I can’t remember what. Hmm… Oh, well. I’m sure I’ll think of it eventually. I’ll tell you when I remember.
You should post more on your account!
~Emmy