11/23/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
This piece has great flow. It’s perfectly fluid. The rhythm is exact and the pace is ideal. And I love the images: “black december,” “kiss the stars.” And there are too many great lines for me to pick one as my favorite. Keep up the great work!
This piece has great flow. It’s perfectly fluid. The rhythm is exact and the pace is ideal. And I love the images: “black december,” “kiss the stars.” And there are too many great lines for me to pick one as my favorite. Keep up the great work!