for I Have A Question, If I May11/27/2006 c1 Imperia
good poem, i think we all wonder that from time to time. It has a good flow to it though putting more metaphors in it to enhance the imagery would be a good idea for this kind of poem. It helps the reader really get into what your saying. Overall though a good poem, thanks for sharing! ^_^
good poem, i think we all wonder that from time to time. It has a good flow to it though putting more metaphors in it to enhance the imagery would be a good idea for this kind of poem. It helps the reader really get into what your saying. Overall though a good poem, thanks for sharing! ^_^