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11/27/2006 c1 temerity
Interesting with a good plot developing. I like it! However, there seems to be a little bit of inconsistancy-Victoria changes to Tori and back again, unless I'm not following something important. It would also be helpful if you fleshed out your characters a bit more. I can see them vaguely, but not as clearly as would be preferred. I'll be looking for another update!

Always write on :)
11/27/2006 c1 8You Make Me Smile A Lot
I really like how you were able to use first person p. o. v. and not make it sucky. I like the bond between the two main characters too. Plez write more! I promise I'll read.
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