8/7/2008 c1 5Isabel Henry
It is beautiful. Not what I was expecting, but wonderful all the same. I cry. Your writing is concise, real, and moving. Thank you for sharing.
~ Priscilla Ryu
It is beautiful. Not what I was expecting, but wonderful all the same. I cry. Your writing is concise, real, and moving. Thank you for sharing.
~ Priscilla Ryu
2/28/2007 c1 3Efiel
I liked how you wrote this... I love the story even though it was a sad one (I'm actually much more into happy endings but there are always exceptions... specially when it's written well.)Keep it up and I'll be reading more of your stories... :D
I liked how you wrote this... I love the story even though it was a sad one (I'm actually much more into happy endings but there are always exceptions... specially when it's written well.)Keep it up and I'll be reading more of your stories... :D
11/29/2006 c1 7Megan.S.Lox
Wow, that was sad, it made me cry. You could make this into a supernatural fic easily too. If Nathaniel can kiss and hug what else can he do. It was also alittle funny how you used the author of The Scarlet Letter's name for a character. But I'm sure people would really love if you continued on.
Wow, that was sad, it made me cry. You could make this into a supernatural fic easily too. If Nathaniel can kiss and hug what else can he do. It was also alittle funny how you used the author of The Scarlet Letter's name for a character. But I'm sure people would really love if you continued on.
11/28/2006 c1 leafie
Thanks for the review!
Actually, I'd say that she only took Dr. McQueen as some sort of a close friend to the siblings. I think that there'll be another take on this story from Dr. McQueen's point of view(and a special epilogue too). It's safe to say that Nathaniel did not only touch Hayden's life, but Caleb McQueen's as well. But how...that's another story.
Thanks for the review!
Actually, I'd say that she only took Dr. McQueen as some sort of a close friend to the siblings. I think that there'll be another take on this story from Dr. McQueen's point of view(and a special epilogue too). It's safe to say that Nathaniel did not only touch Hayden's life, but Caleb McQueen's as well. But how...that's another story.
11/28/2006 c1 Alenor
hmm...does that mean that she ends up with caleb mcqueen? this was good. made me want to cry though. cya later ~ ALenor.
hmm...does that mean that she ends up with caleb mcqueen? this was good. made me want to cry though. cya later ~ ALenor.