for The Girl for Me12/2/2006 c3 
3Inherent
Oh my god! They kissed! *squees* Wow, I've never gotten that fan girlish creepy over a story. *ahems* Kevin is wonderful. I like how he's the stereotypical jock, but not. If that makes sense. He's deeper than that and acts nice to Dani. That's what I like about this story. He does try to understand her. And Dani's awesome too, just because. Anyways, I can't think of much more to say except...umm... you're extra great for updating so soon!
3InherentOh my god! They kissed! *squees* Wow, I've never gotten that fan girlish creepy over a story. *ahems* Kevin is wonderful. I like how he's the stereotypical jock, but not. If that makes sense. He's deeper than that and acts nice to Dani. That's what I like about this story. He does try to understand her. And Dani's awesome too, just because. Anyways, I can't think of much more to say except...umm... you're extra great for updating so soon!
12/2/2006 c3 4WiseCrack
Heh, nice. The suspense is gonna kill me now.
Really like the way things're turnin out for these two. And while Kevin's telling his story, I just couldn't help the smile tugging at the corners; it's not necessarily his story (though it was hilarious) but the way he tells it with such gusto that makes it good. It was like I was with the guy when he's tellin it. Good stuff, good stuff.
4WiseCrackHeh, nice. The suspense is gonna kill me now.
Really like the way things're turnin out for these two. And while Kevin's telling his story, I just couldn't help the smile tugging at the corners; it's not necessarily his story (though it was hilarious) but the way he tells it with such gusto that makes it good. It was like I was with the guy when he's tellin it. Good stuff, good stuff.
11/30/2006 c2 calamity jane
I really like this story! You're doing a wonderful job! I really like Kevin & Dani, and the way you write their dialogue, it's so natural. I am SO hooked on this story (adding to my favs) and I hope you update again real soon!
I really like this story! You're doing a wonderful job! I really like Kevin & Dani, and the way you write their dialogue, it's so natural. I am SO hooked on this story (adding to my favs) and I hope you update again real soon!
11/30/2006 c2 WiseCrack
Hey. I like your story you got here. The narrative (or whoever's talkin) comes out simple it'd fool anybody, but I gotta feeling there's nothing to sniff at in this story. I like, I like. Besides the flow, I like the premise; it's somewhat a cliche theme with two worlds colliding, but what story doesn't deal with that anyway. It's a good theme when done well. Point is, you're doin somethin good with it.
Hmm, well I'm not doing so good with the compliments. But this thing you got going here, I like. And I really like the flow.
Hey. I like your story you got here. The narrative (or whoever's talkin) comes out simple it'd fool anybody, but I gotta feeling there's nothing to sniff at in this story. I like, I like. Besides the flow, I like the premise; it's somewhat a cliche theme with two worlds colliding, but what story doesn't deal with that anyway. It's a good theme when done well. Point is, you're doin somethin good with it.
Hmm, well I'm not doing so good with the compliments. But this thing you got going here, I like. And I really like the flow.
11/30/2006 c2 3Inherent
Aw, Kevin likes Dani. So cute. I love this story! It's so nice to read something original and different from most stuff on here. :)
3InherentAw, Kevin likes Dani. So cute. I love this story! It's so nice to read something original and different from most stuff on here. :)
11/30/2006 c1 tessa123
this is pretty amazing . i cant believe you've only got 1 review.lol . anyway keep up the good work and update soon!
ps:you should leave a space when you change scenes,otherwise it gets a little confusing
this is pretty amazing . i cant believe you've only got 1 review.lol . anyway keep up the good work and update soon!
ps:you should leave a space when you change scenes,otherwise it gets a little confusing
11/28/2006 c1 Inherent
Only the first chapter and I'm in love with this story. Seriously. It's amazing. I'm adding it to my story alert list and I REALLY hope you update soon. If not you're going to have one angry fan.
Only the first chapter and I'm in love with this story. Seriously. It's amazing. I'm adding it to my story alert list and I REALLY hope you update soon. If not you're going to have one angry fan.