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12/2/2006 c3 3Inherent
Oh my god! They kissed! *squees* Wow, I've never gotten that fan girlish creepy over a story. *ahems* Kevin is wonderful. I like how he's the stereotypical jock, but not. If that makes sense. He's deeper than that and acts nice to Dani. That's what I like about this story. He does try to understand her. And Dani's awesome too, just because. Anyways, I can't think of much more to say except...umm... you're extra great for updating so soon!
12/2/2006 c3 5WiseCrack
Heh, nice. The suspense is gonna kill me now.

Really like the way things're turnin out for these two. And while Kevin's telling his story, I just couldn't help the smile tugging at the corners; it's not necessarily his story (though it was hilarious) but the way he tells it with such gusto that makes it good. It was like I was with the guy when he's tellin it. Good stuff, good stuff.
11/30/2006 c2 calamity jane
I really like this story! You're doing a wonderful job! I really like Kevin & Dani, and the way you write their dialogue, it's so natural. I am SO hooked on this story (adding to my favs) and I hope you update again real soon!
11/30/2006 c2 WiseCrack
Hey. I like your story you got here. The narrative (or whoever's talkin) comes out simple it'd fool anybody, but I gotta feeling there's nothing to sniff at in this story. I like, I like. Besides the flow, I like the premise; it's somewhat a cliche theme with two worlds colliding, but what story doesn't deal with that anyway. It's a good theme when done well. Point is, you're doin somethin good with it.

Hmm, well I'm not doing so good with the compliments. But this thing you got going here, I like. And I really like the flow.
11/30/2006 c2 25Esquirella
I really love this story so far!
11/30/2006 c2 3Inherent
Aw, Kevin likes Dani. So cute. I love this story! It's so nice to read something original and different from most stuff on here. :)
11/30/2006 c1 tessa123
this is pretty amazing . i cant believe you've only got 1 review.lol . anyway keep up the good work and update soon!

ps:you should leave a space when you change scenes,otherwise it gets a little confusing
11/28/2006 c1 Inherent
Only the first chapter and I'm in love with this story. Seriously. It's amazing. I'm adding it to my story alert list and I REALLY hope you update soon. If not you're going to have one angry fan.
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