for The Girl for Me5/18/2013 c4 L
This story is so cute... I really really identify with Dani... Finally beginning my transition into a girl, and presenting as a girl full time was when I let go of the act. I didn't have to be something I wasn't anymore. I'm just a girl, and that's all there is to it.
And about those gay guys... Yep... I've had my fair share of intolerance from gay guys. They never wanted to be around me or date me because I was "too much like a girl, but not even a real one." It hurt to hear that. Well, now I get to escape their bigotry and hate for feminine guys and become the girl I truly am. Now my femininity is appreciated, not looked down on.
And I'm happy that Dani's mom is accepting of her wearing female clothes and liking guys. My greatest hope for Dani is that she'll realize that she's transgender (if in fact she is, which I'm really getting the feeling she is), and will begin seeing a gender therapist and start on hormone replacement therapy. That would be awesome!
And thank you so much for writing this. I felt pretty down today... And this made me feel less alone. Thank you so so much.
This story is so cute... I really really identify with Dani... Finally beginning my transition into a girl, and presenting as a girl full time was when I let go of the act. I didn't have to be something I wasn't anymore. I'm just a girl, and that's all there is to it.
And about those gay guys... Yep... I've had my fair share of intolerance from gay guys. They never wanted to be around me or date me because I was "too much like a girl, but not even a real one." It hurt to hear that. Well, now I get to escape their bigotry and hate for feminine guys and become the girl I truly am. Now my femininity is appreciated, not looked down on.
And I'm happy that Dani's mom is accepting of her wearing female clothes and liking guys. My greatest hope for Dani is that she'll realize that she's transgender (if in fact she is, which I'm really getting the feeling she is), and will begin seeing a gender therapist and start on hormone replacement therapy. That would be awesome!
And thank you so much for writing this. I felt pretty down today... And this made me feel less alone. Thank you so so much.
4/10/2013 c17 Nekosuke
This was a really nice story! There bantering with each other was really funny! And through this I was able to know more about and be open to transgenders. Good tead!:)
This was a really nice story! There bantering with each other was really funny! And through this I was able to know more about and be open to transgenders. Good tead!:)
4/5/2013 c17 Ej
Really enjoyed this and sooo well written. I love the message too, you rock!
Really enjoyed this and sooo well written. I love the message too, you rock!
2/22/2013 c17 
4GrangerDanger333
Awwww the ending was soo cute :D Really good story here, I love that it isn't just a cool story, it's actually really interesting and depicts transgender/gay issues really well. I found it brilliant how confused Dani always was about whether she was Dani or Danny or both, and what she wanted to be like. It was so sad when he tried to be more masculine and dominant. I dunno, i just found that hard to read. But Kevin was so lovely when he told her that he liked her as both. Amazing story. There are so many bits that were soooo good but I can't mention them all. You're a brilliant writer. I expect this story would be really helpful to people with similar problems about discovering who they are. :) Thank you for writing!
4GrangerDanger333Awwww the ending was soo cute :D Really good story here, I love that it isn't just a cool story, it's actually really interesting and depicts transgender/gay issues really well. I found it brilliant how confused Dani always was about whether she was Dani or Danny or both, and what she wanted to be like. It was so sad when he tried to be more masculine and dominant. I dunno, i just found that hard to read. But Kevin was so lovely when he told her that he liked her as both. Amazing story. There are so many bits that were soooo good but I can't mention them all. You're a brilliant writer. I expect this story would be really helpful to people with similar problems about discovering who they are. :) Thank you for writing!
2/14/2013 c17 Chris
This was so fun and entertaining and just plain amazing
Thank you for an amazing story love 3
This was so fun and entertaining and just plain amazing
Thank you for an amazing story love 3
2/3/2013 c17 allancaldera
I love this story so fucking much it is the first time I read a story about a transvesti and its amazing I thoguht I would never like a story like this but I did and I enjoy it. My favorite character was Kevin so dumb but so honest and cute and gentlemen I felt for him.
I love this story so fucking much it is the first time I read a story about a transvesti and its amazing I thoguht I would never like a story like this but I did and I enjoy it. My favorite character was Kevin so dumb but so honest and cute and gentlemen I felt for him.
1/16/2013 c1 Kasten Rose
Well I joined up for no other reason really than to give you and another author on here FB, although now that I have the account I will probably make use of it. I was gonna PM you, but no, I have to wait 24hrs for that. Something I wasn’t willing to do, heaven forbid that something happen and I forget, because I REALLY wanted to send you *SOMETHING* saying…WOW! Impressed!
I read this one, The Girl for me, *ALL* in one go today! I also read your profile and profile updates. They gave me a giggle. You’re clever and interesting and you made me smile So I’m pointing it out. It’s not a flirt or anything *grin* I’m a happily married woman who’s just very vocal most days…
So I I guess I’ll start out by telling you that I am, I suppose, a yaoi fan-girl in addition to being an author myself. Although at my age, shall we say, past the thirty mark, I don’t feel like a yaoi-fan girl! Personally, I always think squealing young girls in relation to those words. And there’s nothing wrong with that at all. It just doesn’t seem like me, you know? I feel old some days lol
My point is, I read slash, Yaoi, the original stuff. All M/M in nature. I also write original stuff, thought most of it is not posted to the web.
And FLAT OUT TRUTH, this story of yours is not in the normal range of what I tend to read. I’m more into supernatural romance stuff, with lots and lots of plot and intrigue. And yeah admittedly heavy on the smut at times. But there was a rec for you on GoodReads and I followed it here. For the last few weeks I’ve been chasing down original-slash. I’m in a reading phase rather than a writing phase at the moment.
So here was your book in front of me. I started it. Now honestly cross-dressing, that’s never been a kink of mine. Femininity, some of my characters have a brand of that. But truly *I* don’t go looking for this brand of story. Plus I’m not one to read *Self Discovery* fics. My guys know who they are. In fact in my fictional world I don’t slap on the gay and straight labels. Everyone’s just sexual! And mostly bisexual even though *I* focus on the M/M thing almost exclusively. That’d be my kink lol. Also, this was very mild on the smut. Written in a high school setting, and included a jock of all things! I HATED high school lol. These are not things that I would normally search out to read…
And yet I read through your book in one solid work day. Good thing I’m my own boss, eh? Lol I sucked this story up, and fell in love with Danny and Kevin. This was beautifully presented, well written and a darn fine read. Simple, sweet and very memorable. It will be one of those stories I remember for years to come. You drew me in as a reader, held my attention. You made me root for these two as people. You pulled me into their lives and made me want to tag along on their journey of self discovery. It became about these two, not about the sex or the kink (or about being a yaoi fan girl) It was just about Danny and Kevin, two people finding their way into adulthood and life together. That’s impressive. It was just one heck of a story over all. With that said, I thank you for sharing it.
Dang I’m long winded!
Well I joined up for no other reason really than to give you and another author on here FB, although now that I have the account I will probably make use of it. I was gonna PM you, but no, I have to wait 24hrs for that. Something I wasn’t willing to do, heaven forbid that something happen and I forget, because I REALLY wanted to send you *SOMETHING* saying…WOW! Impressed!
I read this one, The Girl for me, *ALL* in one go today! I also read your profile and profile updates. They gave me a giggle. You’re clever and interesting and you made me smile So I’m pointing it out. It’s not a flirt or anything *grin* I’m a happily married woman who’s just very vocal most days…
So I I guess I’ll start out by telling you that I am, I suppose, a yaoi fan-girl in addition to being an author myself. Although at my age, shall we say, past the thirty mark, I don’t feel like a yaoi-fan girl! Personally, I always think squealing young girls in relation to those words. And there’s nothing wrong with that at all. It just doesn’t seem like me, you know? I feel old some days lol
My point is, I read slash, Yaoi, the original stuff. All M/M in nature. I also write original stuff, thought most of it is not posted to the web.
And FLAT OUT TRUTH, this story of yours is not in the normal range of what I tend to read. I’m more into supernatural romance stuff, with lots and lots of plot and intrigue. And yeah admittedly heavy on the smut at times. But there was a rec for you on GoodReads and I followed it here. For the last few weeks I’ve been chasing down original-slash. I’m in a reading phase rather than a writing phase at the moment.
So here was your book in front of me. I started it. Now honestly cross-dressing, that’s never been a kink of mine. Femininity, some of my characters have a brand of that. But truly *I* don’t go looking for this brand of story. Plus I’m not one to read *Self Discovery* fics. My guys know who they are. In fact in my fictional world I don’t slap on the gay and straight labels. Everyone’s just sexual! And mostly bisexual even though *I* focus on the M/M thing almost exclusively. That’d be my kink lol. Also, this was very mild on the smut. Written in a high school setting, and included a jock of all things! I HATED high school lol. These are not things that I would normally search out to read…
And yet I read through your book in one solid work day. Good thing I’m my own boss, eh? Lol I sucked this story up, and fell in love with Danny and Kevin. This was beautifully presented, well written and a darn fine read. Simple, sweet and very memorable. It will be one of those stories I remember for years to come. You drew me in as a reader, held my attention. You made me root for these two as people. You pulled me into their lives and made me want to tag along on their journey of self discovery. It became about these two, not about the sex or the kink (or about being a yaoi fan girl) It was just about Danny and Kevin, two people finding their way into adulthood and life together. That’s impressive. It was just one heck of a story over all. With that said, I thank you for sharing it.
Dang I’m long winded!
1/10/2013 c17 Guest
Great great great! Love it! Is there a sequel? Love the ideas, love the story. Well done. Great writing.
Great great great! Love it! Is there a sequel? Love the ideas, love the story. Well done. Great writing.
12/20/2012 c17 Anna
Loved this book, never expected to but thanks for a very fun and touching read:)
Loved this book, never expected to but thanks for a very fun and touching read:)
12/8/2012 c1 gotb30
I absolutely adored your story. The characters Kevin and Dani came to life, and I'm still thinking about them days later. This really is good enough to be published! I loved it. xo
I absolutely adored your story. The characters Kevin and Dani came to life, and I'm still thinking about them days later. This really is good enough to be published! I loved it. xo
11/15/2012 c17 Guest
This was a wonderful story! Thank you for allowing them to have such a hopeful ending.
This was a wonderful story! Thank you for allowing them to have such a hopeful ending.
11/15/2012 c5 Guest
So sweet. Ilike the way you end each chapter. definitely leaves the reader wanting to turn the next page. So far nice pace, unique strong story line, and charming , engaging characters
So sweet. Ilike the way you end each chapter. definitely leaves the reader wanting to turn the next page. So far nice pace, unique strong story line, and charming , engaging characters
11/7/2012 c17 5Arya Yamamoto
Absolutely love it. Not only does Dani and Kevin rock socks, they have great chemistry and presence. And the themes were dealt with nicely, good over all flow. Awesome dialogue, pacing, character development etc. Very very nice indeed!
5Arya YamamotoAbsolutely love it. Not only does Dani and Kevin rock socks, they have great chemistry and presence. And the themes were dealt with nicely, good over all flow. Awesome dialogue, pacing, character development etc. Very very nice indeed!
10/30/2012 c1 DrYuriMom
This story was such a fun romp- seriously! I like very much how you never quite pigeonhole Dani. I volunteer with young transyouth and it’s a joy to see how they are really starting to reject the polar opposite sexual roles we older folk have taken for granted since they’ve been force-fed to us since birth. To maintain my career, I had to go ‘all girl’ despite the fact as female as I am I never really had it out for my penis. It had to go, though, because the people around me would never feel comfortable with me unless I was one or the other, male or female. I adore Dani’s (and by association so many young people these days) strength to stand firm being both and neither. To those who have commented thinking the back and forth of pronoun and gender roles was inauthentic of Dani, let me assure them it’s not. I’m more feminine by far than my cis-female wife of 22 years, yet there are times I am as male as I ever was before transition- C-cups and lithe figure and all. I can get the queerest looks in the halls as I chat up guys who knew me before as one of the guys, yet clad in a dress and knee-high boots looking as much the girl with my 5’6” frame as any woman born. Despite being ‘fully realized’, I’m still both and neither and stories like this help remind me of that- and that it’s not such a bad thing. Thank you for that gift. :-)
Back to the story mechanics, I loved your dialog. I found myself laughing my hiney off so many times I lost count. More than once I yelled at my screen as I was reading because of the emotions you elicited. I never do that- or at least I haven’t in a very, very long time. As a writer, I envy your ability to script such believable situations. I was taking notes, trust me.
I’ll also say I enjoyed the romance. Despite my decision to stay faithful to my marriage, both my wife and I are quite heterosexual with all the complications that implies. I’ll likely die a virgin as a girl, so it’s nice when a story can bring out the fantasy element for me. I know exactly what it’s like to be Dani- to need to be needed more than anything else. You pegged one of the key things that makes someone a transgirl vs a gay crossdresser.
So yeah, I had a blast and could barely put it down. I’m sad to see you stopped writing years ago. It’s a shame since you were really getting good at it. Hopefully you’ll come back someday. I’ve followed your profile and I’ll be waiting. In the meantime, thank you so much for sharing this! :-)
Dr Yuri Mom
This story was such a fun romp- seriously! I like very much how you never quite pigeonhole Dani. I volunteer with young transyouth and it’s a joy to see how they are really starting to reject the polar opposite sexual roles we older folk have taken for granted since they’ve been force-fed to us since birth. To maintain my career, I had to go ‘all girl’ despite the fact as female as I am I never really had it out for my penis. It had to go, though, because the people around me would never feel comfortable with me unless I was one or the other, male or female. I adore Dani’s (and by association so many young people these days) strength to stand firm being both and neither. To those who have commented thinking the back and forth of pronoun and gender roles was inauthentic of Dani, let me assure them it’s not. I’m more feminine by far than my cis-female wife of 22 years, yet there are times I am as male as I ever was before transition- C-cups and lithe figure and all. I can get the queerest looks in the halls as I chat up guys who knew me before as one of the guys, yet clad in a dress and knee-high boots looking as much the girl with my 5’6” frame as any woman born. Despite being ‘fully realized’, I’m still both and neither and stories like this help remind me of that- and that it’s not such a bad thing. Thank you for that gift. :-)
Back to the story mechanics, I loved your dialog. I found myself laughing my hiney off so many times I lost count. More than once I yelled at my screen as I was reading because of the emotions you elicited. I never do that- or at least I haven’t in a very, very long time. As a writer, I envy your ability to script such believable situations. I was taking notes, trust me.
I’ll also say I enjoyed the romance. Despite my decision to stay faithful to my marriage, both my wife and I are quite heterosexual with all the complications that implies. I’ll likely die a virgin as a girl, so it’s nice when a story can bring out the fantasy element for me. I know exactly what it’s like to be Dani- to need to be needed more than anything else. You pegged one of the key things that makes someone a transgirl vs a gay crossdresser.
So yeah, I had a blast and could barely put it down. I’m sad to see you stopped writing years ago. It’s a shame since you were really getting good at it. Hopefully you’ll come back someday. I’ve followed your profile and I’ll be waiting. In the meantime, thank you so much for sharing this! :-)
Dr Yuri Mom