for Numb5/7/2007 c1 
6Carmel March
Great story :) I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline was creative, kept the reader interested throughout the entire read. Good job on this.
~carm~
6Carmel MarchGreat story :) I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline was creative, kept the reader interested throughout the entire read. Good job on this.
~carm~