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8/24/2012 c1 5Marjulie
It's about 11:20 at night at where I am, but I just had to comment. I found this poem a year ago and completely fell in love with it along with all your other works some time ago, lost it, found it, and lost it again. This time I decided to favorite it because I might not be so lucky if I ever lose again. I'll just end it here, good job!
11/17/2007 c1 46Seven Rose
I've always wondered how haikus receive so many reviews, just because they are so short, but when a small poem can show so much meaning and emotion, I can finally understand.

After I read this haiku I was like wow...from the lovely smile going away to leave you in tears...just how it's written...hmm...I love it!
1/24/2007 c1 9twilightwriter07
I love the contrasting imagery in this 'ku. The fading light to the tears works nicely. Nice job!
1/6/2007 c1 19Awen1923
Nicely written. Good use of imagery.
12/15/2006 c1 10dimethylmercury
Wow.. nice imagery...Thanks for reviewing Perseverance(:
12/6/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Oh, this is beautiful. I love the image of a smile melting. Strong verb usage there. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
12/6/2006 c1 169MallowsWins
The undertones in this haiku were dark. Emotional haiku are hard to pull off, but I think you have done it here. Great haiku, impressive.

Daze
12/2/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
Beautiful imagry and emotion, I love this! Awesome job!
11/29/2006 c1 463All Alone With Her Thoughts
Haikus have so little room to say what you want to, which is why I sometimes think they are pretty hard to write. You did this haiku justice, but I don't really get the feeling that this haiku was filled with emotion. But, perhaps, it's just me.

Thanks so much for the review, and the add to your favourites list!

Rowan.
11/29/2006 c1 322Basara
ouch...

nice...

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