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6/12/2007 c1 Morgan
hahahah nice ending. bit sad bout his wife though...
2/9/2007 c1 Bri Neves
Quite funny and amusing. The content could have been more eloquent but, considering the time constraints, you did a really good job.
1/28/2007 c1 24Will Sachiksy
If this is what you can do in a half-hour, I need to read what else you've written.

You have an excellent sense of comedic timing. I liked your word choice as well (especially surrounding the wife). I've rarely seen repetition and onomotopoeia work so well together. Well done.
1/8/2007 c1 Kumquat21
Ah! That's EXCELENT! The voice with which you write this is perfect, and your ending was brilliant. 30 minutes? I couldn't tell. Kudos!
12/11/2006 c1 The Intelligent Designer
This makes me hate people. Nice job, though I'm not really sure why you wrote it...I guess it doesn't matter because it was very powerful. It made me want to destroy something or someone for that poor guy...
11/29/2006 c1 Chocolate Trifle
You could have done more, I suppose, but it was pretty good for a thirty minute, self-imposed challenge.

Poor guy - I wonder what made him marry that woman in the first place? :)

- Animeniac

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