
8/7/2017 c2
1Raph H
Hi there!
Sorry to hear bout the plagiarizm, and Im happy to PM about stuff if you want.
However you arent allowed to do monologues about yourself especially not disguised as a story. The forums are there for you dont upload actual content within a week i may have to report you. I dont want to, you seem nice, but just dont disobey guidelines. It wont get you anywhere here.

Hi there!
Sorry to hear bout the plagiarizm, and Im happy to PM about stuff if you want.
However you arent allowed to do monologues about yourself especially not disguised as a story. The forums are there for you dont upload actual content within a week i may have to report you. I dont want to, you seem nice, but just dont disobey guidelines. It wont get you anywhere here.
8/21/2013 c12 ur ahotdevil sir
i luv this ooo i wanna no what will happen wit her uncle that wud of been so embarrassing
i luv this ooo i wanna no what will happen wit her uncle that wud of been so embarrassing
8/11/2013 c11 jojo
finally romance lily x will 3
finally romance lily x will 3
8/11/2013 c6 jojo
great story so far
i am a bit disappointed because there is no love showing until now
and why she refuses to tell them about her parent's death why why ?
great story so far
i am a bit disappointed because there is no love showing until now
and why she refuses to tell them about her parent's death why why ?
4/15/2013 c20 Dominique Diane
4 years without updating! Please! I love Will he's so hot and sweet! :)
Regards,
Diane.
4 years without updating! Please! I love Will he's so hot and sweet! :)
Regards,
Diane.
2/11/2013 c20 AnonymousReads
Hey I was really enjoying reading this book so you have to tell me what happens next. You never did explain much about Liam either so please tell me what his secret is. Update soon. Please. :)
Hey I was really enjoying reading this book so you have to tell me what happens next. You never did explain much about Liam either so please tell me what his secret is. Update soon. Please. :)
12/16/2012 c20 altogirl7
WHHHHAAAAATTTTTT? why'd you stop writing? :( i wanna know what happens over vacation... :((((( update soon please!
WHHHHAAAAATTTTTT? why'd you stop writing? :( i wanna know what happens over vacation... :((((( update soon please!
7/27/2012 c20 Fly high
Really cool story, really want to here about lily's stay at will's house...: D
Really cool story, really want to here about lily's stay at will's house...: D
7/22/2012 c20 clutzrox
please update soon! I'm so looking forward to the rest of the story. It's really good and I love these types of stories but you can't really find them. And yours is extremely good and I'm excited. Keep updating please.
Maybe you could do a chapter in Will's point of view. I would really like to read that. But if you don't I totally understand. It's your story. Hope you don't feel like iI'm pressuring you.
Keep up the good work. It's awsome.
Love your story,
Clutzrox
please update soon! I'm so looking forward to the rest of the story. It's really good and I love these types of stories but you can't really find them. And yours is extremely good and I'm excited. Keep updating please.
Maybe you could do a chapter in Will's point of view. I would really like to read that. But if you don't I totally understand. It's your story. Hope you don't feel like iI'm pressuring you.
Keep up the good work. It's awsome.
Love your story,
Clutzrox
4/7/2012 c20 Alixermixer
This is really to cute but I wonder what was wrong with Liam? I really hope that you come back and finish this story. It is really really good!
This is really to cute but I wonder what was wrong with Liam? I really hope that you come back and finish this story. It is really really good!
8/27/2011 c20 jen
i honestly didn't like the story. you have great ideas and vision it's just that the predicaments you choose to put your characters in are just lame. i mean why would telling people close to you that your parents have passed on and then when they find out you freak out and almost break up with your boyfriend? it's just bizarre. my father passed away and although i don't necessarily volunteer personal information, it's never bothered me when i'm forced to mention that my dad has passed away. i agree with one of the readers that your story lacks realism in it. too bad, i started reading the story because from the summary alone it made me think that it might be a fun read.
i honestly didn't like the story. you have great ideas and vision it's just that the predicaments you choose to put your characters in are just lame. i mean why would telling people close to you that your parents have passed on and then when they find out you freak out and almost break up with your boyfriend? it's just bizarre. my father passed away and although i don't necessarily volunteer personal information, it's never bothered me when i'm forced to mention that my dad has passed away. i agree with one of the readers that your story lacks realism in it. too bad, i started reading the story because from the summary alone it made me think that it might be a fun read.