for Tell Me1/13/2007 c1 
1Toadster
gosh i've felt this way so many times when i was younger, and even now sometimes (even though i know its silly)! you've done a good job of capturing an elusive feeling in a very straightforward manner.
1Toadstergosh i've felt this way so many times when i was younger, and even now sometimes (even though i know its silly)! you've done a good job of capturing an elusive feeling in a very straightforward manner.
12/6/2006 c1 The Intelligent Designer
This is sad...in terms of a teenager pining for attention and not getting any. I liked the perspective you put on it, and the rythym as well. The short lines made it easy to follow, nice job!
This is sad...in terms of a teenager pining for attention and not getting any. I liked the perspective you put on it, and the rythym as well. The short lines made it easy to follow, nice job!
11/29/2006 c1 Ryustorm
super cute. and very sad too, its true and there is that little voice in your mind that says 'are you carzy?' why bother? but as soon as you see ur crush again its like, 'blah blah blah, love love love' hehe.
i like the chorus thing going on, good job
super cute. and very sad too, its true and there is that little voice in your mind that says 'are you carzy?' why bother? but as soon as you see ur crush again its like, 'blah blah blah, love love love' hehe.
i like the chorus thing going on, good job