for You Deserve Worse12/3/2006 c1 Meg
Awh.
Well what happened to writing about happy bluebirds?
I did like it though. Very mean and vicious.
Kinda makes me worry though.
Awh.
Well what happened to writing about happy bluebirds?
I did like it though. Very mean and vicious.
Kinda makes me worry though.
11/29/2006 c1 
37TaltushMeiMei
Wow... Creepy and rather depressing, but I like it. It's written... hm. It's written in a way that makes the early morning me happy and nodding my head knowingly. :D
37TaltushMeiMeiWow... Creepy and rather depressing, but I like it. It's written... hm. It's written in a way that makes the early morning me happy and nodding my head knowingly. :D
11/29/2006 c1 23WickedSilence
I like it. The repetition echoes the force of the speaker's emotions, and the way the poem progressed kept the repeated phrases from growing dull. Your poem is intriguing; there's just no other way to put it. I really like it. Keep up the good work!
23WickedSilenceI like it. The repetition echoes the force of the speaker's emotions, and the way the poem progressed kept the repeated phrases from growing dull. Your poem is intriguing; there's just no other way to put it. I really like it. Keep up the good work!
11/29/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Wow, this is so emotional! I could really feel the anger in this. Aww, always be positive, yup? Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Wow, this is so emotional! I could really feel the anger in this. Aww, always be positive, yup? Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^