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for You Deserve Worse

12/3/2006 c1 Meg
Awh.

Well what happened to writing about happy bluebirds?

I did like it though. Very mean and vicious.

Kinda makes me worry though.
11/29/2006 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
Wow... Creepy and rather depressing, but I like it. It's written... hm. It's written in a way that makes the early morning me happy and nodding my head knowingly. :D
11/29/2006 c1 23WickedSilence
I like it. The repetition echoes the force of the speaker's emotions, and the way the poem progressed kept the repeated phrases from growing dull. Your poem is intriguing; there's just no other way to put it. I really like it. Keep up the good work!
11/29/2006 c1 15Champagne2
If I had to sum this up in one word it would be: Powerful.
11/29/2006 c1 insanitystrikesthrice
Aw, Tad...

You're right. She shouldn't have done that.
11/29/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Wow, this is so emotional! I could really feel the anger in this. Aww, always be positive, yup? Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

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