for Princess Sariah3/27/2008 c1 
3The Celtic Bard
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Well, it's perfectly hilarious! It's fast-paced and fun, although the writing IS a little bit childish I suppose. I mean, you could put more detail in about the room, the cloth, etc. But for the purpose of at least this chapter, it's great!
3The Celtic BardConfuddled: /define.php?term=Confuddled&defid=883051 (Note: this might not work.)
Well, it's perfectly hilarious! It's fast-paced and fun, although the writing IS a little bit childish I suppose. I mean, you could put more detail in about the room, the cloth, etc. But for the purpose of at least this chapter, it's great!
1/7/2007 c5 Anoh
Good chapter! Just one spelling error:
[Sariah had recieved less attention than her princess.]
Received.
Good chapter! Just one spelling error:
[Sariah had recieved less attention than her princess.]
Received.
1/7/2007 c4 Anoh
Hmm... I was expecting something more thrilling than an old lady wanting to help them, but that's just me.
Hmm... I was expecting something more thrilling than an old lady wanting to help them, but that's just me.
1/7/2007 c2 Anoh
It was pretty well written, and I'm going to read on.
...Sorry, I can't find criticism to offer.
It was pretty well written, and I'm going to read on.
...Sorry, I can't find criticism to offer.
1/7/2007 c1 Anoh
Your story doesn't suck. I actually liked it.
Just one thing:
["Which is now. I don't wanna go to court!"]
I don't know if royalty or anyone connected to royalty would ever use slang like 'wanna'.
Your story doesn't suck. I actually liked it.
Just one thing:
["Which is now. I don't wanna go to court!"]
I don't know if royalty or anyone connected to royalty would ever use slang like 'wanna'.