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1/27/2007 c1 On The Esplanade
Nicely done. I liked the bird references; gave the whole thing an airy feel but the whole drama of it gave it gravity. So there you go, you've achieved airy gravity. But anyway, it was great.
12/2/2006 c1 4Sakka-Fenikkusu
Boo! *pops out of nowhere* This rocks! *disappears* ... *appears again* This really rocks! ^_^ *disappears again*
12/2/2006 c1 tesa131313
I love this poem it's brilliant! I like how to used the metaphors of birds. The imagery was great I loved it. The word choice intesified the beauty of this poem. The story was fantastic

five stars *
12/2/2006 c1 28A. E. Custer
Great visual, though perhaps you should consider adding more
12/1/2006 c1 24Mistress of Eternity
Beautiful storytelling.

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