for Like Falcons in Flight1/27/2007 c1 On The Esplanade
Nicely done. I liked the bird references; gave the whole thing an airy feel but the whole drama of it gave it gravity. So there you go, you've achieved airy gravity. But anyway, it was great.
Nicely done. I liked the bird references; gave the whole thing an airy feel but the whole drama of it gave it gravity. So there you go, you've achieved airy gravity. But anyway, it was great.
12/2/2006 c1 
4Sakka-Fenikkusu
Boo! *pops out of nowhere* This rocks! *disappears* ... *appears again* This really rocks! ^_^ *disappears again*
4Sakka-FenikkusuBoo! *pops out of nowhere* This rocks! *disappears* ... *appears again* This really rocks! ^_^ *disappears again*
12/2/2006 c1 tesa131313
I love this poem it's brilliant! I like how to used the metaphors of birds. The imagery was great I loved it. The word choice intesified the beauty of this poem. The story was fantastic
five stars *
I love this poem it's brilliant! I like how to used the metaphors of birds. The imagery was great I loved it. The word choice intesified the beauty of this poem. The story was fantastic
five stars *