for Confessions of a Model Booker12/28/2008 c2 LethargicLove
For some reason, I always believed that Anna never actually became a party girl and that it was all Jack's prejudice that affected his perception. I can't wait to see how the story continues to develop though.
For some reason, I always believed that Anna never actually became a party girl and that it was all Jack's prejudice that affected his perception. I can't wait to see how the story continues to develop though.
2/4/2007 c2 
1jeudie
I like the story so far. Interesting plot and interesting characters. I'm just waiting for more chapters so I can learn more about Anne and Jack!
Keep it up.
- Jeudie
P.S. I loved this line from chapter one: "What’s yours? Jack McFarlane?"
XD
1jeudieI like the story so far. Interesting plot and interesting characters. I'm just waiting for more chapters so I can learn more about Anne and Jack!
Keep it up.
- Jeudie
P.S. I loved this line from chapter one: "What’s yours? Jack McFarlane?"
XD
12/1/2006 c1 LethargicLove
I don't think that I've ever read a story with a plot like this before. In a site where quite a large amount of the stories are very original, this is quite shocking. I hope you keep on writing. Just wondering, are you thinking of switching points of views between Jack and Anne?
I don't think that I've ever read a story with a plot like this before. In a site where quite a large amount of the stories are very original, this is quite shocking. I hope you keep on writing. Just wondering, are you thinking of switching points of views between Jack and Anne?
12/1/2006 c1 13xtotallyatpeacex
Hey, this looks pretty good so far. Yeah, that's pretty much all I have to say for now... Update soon! :D
13xtotallyatpeacexHey, this looks pretty good so far. Yeah, that's pretty much all I have to say for now... Update soon! :D