
12/4/2006 c1
65Continuation
Disturbing. Your style of writing is actually really good. I actually felt bad for the girl with gills, which I have to say doesn't happen to often, haha. Keep up the good work!

Disturbing. Your style of writing is actually really good. I actually felt bad for the girl with gills, which I have to say doesn't happen to often, haha. Keep up the good work!
12/2/2006 c1
11Rusty Camino
you're a really good writer. you know how to pace the story and the configuration of your words blows my mind.

you're a really good writer. you know how to pace the story and the configuration of your words blows my mind.