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12/2/2006 c1 11Rusty Camino
*favorited* (if that's a word...)

this is phenomenal.
12/2/2006 c1 Counting Petals
"Dry, and cracked, bleeding so that the blood stains his teeth."

You might want to clarify what exactly is bleeding here. I assumed that it was his lips, but still.

"He dies alone with the birth of the day."

Ah, loved this!

Very well-written, keep it up!

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