
1/20/2007 c1
81Princess-anna57
Ooh, I did read this before, but didn't get the chance to review. I like it a lot. Every line is awesome! Fantastic. Keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^

Ooh, I did read this before, but didn't get the chance to review. I like it a lot. Every line is awesome! Fantastic. Keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
12/2/2006 c1
30fallawayphoenix
Well, I LOVE the idea and it ended strong. The only critical thing I'd say is that it seemed at parts that you were trying a little too hard to make it rhyme.

Well, I LOVE the idea and it ended strong. The only critical thing I'd say is that it seemed at parts that you were trying a little too hard to make it rhyme.