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1/25/2007 c1 69Lowell Boston
Great opening chapter. I like the dual vantage points in your story telling through reliving Gillian's memory and how you create the context of the story's world. Is this a thematic statement on the danger of religious dogma or the 'with us or against us' convictions that strict belief systems can create?
12/3/2006 c2 1Archaic Wrath
Although my time was limited and I was only able to read through the first chapter and part of the second, I must say that what you have so far is very well written. The descriptions are vivid and the sentences are well thought out, making it an easy story to read. All in all, I enjoyed what I got to read of it, and I'll check back when I have more time.

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