for Trying to rise
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64fatbird33great last line. I loved the journey of this poem. I don't know what else to call it. It seemed like a journey to me. great job. Keep writing:)
12/4/2006 c1 70Bob EvansWow, this has to be the best one yet. Quite deep. I do hope you keep it up!
~Bob Evans
for Trying to rise
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