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1/8/2007 c1 2sicklysnowwhite
irate. good word. definitly not very discriptive. you really need to work on that. oh well, i have to go now so i'll start again tomorrow. this was... semiokay. didnt really like it, but i can deal. it had a nice idea behind it.
12/5/2006 c1 The Intelligent Designer
(From the title, this makes sense.) Sounds like someones going through a little PMS here...I liked it. I don't like the word irate. It's, like, really weird...other than that, it wasn't too bad at all...nice job!
12/5/2006 c1 13x Salem x
oh, how I know this all to well.

except usually I feel guilty in my resentment.

hmm...

very concrete, and I can't decide if you're telling too much instead of showing, but I have a feeling that's what you're going for.

nice semi-rhyme scheme you've got going, though.

:D
12/5/2006 c1 48tuieri
so frustrating when people either can't understand your emotions from the way you act or believe that they are source of said emotions and that you need to talk to them over it. hah. i've had similar instances that normally end up with shouting fights

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