6/27/2007 c1 1Mayleena
yes...sorry but i like sad endings! i mean, every single ending in the world seems to be happy. this was really good...i thought it was very well thought out and it seems like some real old legend! great write!

12/5/2006 c1 1John Arbiter
Too short, not as much substance, not really any underlying ideas. Semi-good, though. I'll applaud you on that.