for Sacred Paradise: A Compilation of Short Poems12/13/2007 c1 KatyaTawny
oh my God, YES! If you could only turn in one poem, this would be it.
oh my God, YES! If you could only turn in one poem, this would be it.
1/8/2007 c3 
87R.J. Crosbie
I liked the...what's that called...alliteration of "poercelain poison"..."rotting velvet worn with thin lies"...makes me wonder what a "thin lie" is...and salty rhythms...I really like series poems!
87R.J. CrosbieI liked the...what's that called...alliteration of "poercelain poison"..."rotting velvet worn with thin lies"...makes me wonder what a "thin lie" is...and salty rhythms...I really like series poems!
1/6/2007 c4 5Raspberry Twirl
OH. my. GOD. this is so beautiful. each of your words are so rich, colorful, swirly, filled with memories and wishes. desires. i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem. i'm sorry i sound so stupid, but i don't know what else to say.
this is beautiful.
5Raspberry TwirlOH. my. GOD. this is so beautiful. each of your words are so rich, colorful, swirly, filled with memories and wishes. desires. i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem. i'm sorry i sound so stupid, but i don't know what else to say.
this is beautiful.