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for Sacred Paradise: A Compilation of Short Poems

12/13/2007 c1 KatyaTawny
oh my God, YES! If you could only turn in one poem, this would be it.
1/8/2007 c3 87R.J. Crosbie
I liked the...what's that called...alliteration of "poercelain poison"..."rotting velvet worn with thin lies"...makes me wonder what a "thin lie" is...and salty rhythms...I really like series poems!
1/6/2007 c4 5Raspberry Twirl
OH. my. GOD. this is so beautiful. each of your words are so rich, colorful, swirly, filled with memories and wishes. desires. i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem. i'm sorry i sound so stupid, but i don't know what else to say.

this is beautiful.
12/26/2006 c4 10sathepine
Nice and touching :-)

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