for Shiver in the Night12/8/2006 c1 
19Awen1923
Nicely written. I have never mastered the sonnet (nor any other form of poetry). I thought you did a good job with the rhyming scheme. The only sentence that seemed truly awkward was the first line.
You have some very good lines - "But fear in darkness need not be of death/Nor shall all life wait for the break of day/The only true diff’rence is winter’s breath/The chill of which is banishèd in May".
A very nice poem.
19Awen1923Nicely written. I have never mastered the sonnet (nor any other form of poetry). I thought you did a good job with the rhyming scheme. The only sentence that seemed truly awkward was the first line.
You have some very good lines - "But fear in darkness need not be of death/Nor shall all life wait for the break of day/The only true diff’rence is winter’s breath/The chill of which is banishèd in May".
A very nice poem.