for Love Or Something Like It1/17/2009 c1 
50GirlWithTheBrokenSmile
I like it:) Beautifully written and funny, which I didn't expect.
Write on!
50GirlWithTheBrokenSmileI like it:) Beautifully written and funny, which I didn't expect.
Write on!
8/8/2008 c1 3Jestry
Ahahah.
That was pretty funny.
I like your random (inner thought) insertions.
"Spinach leaves sticking to forearms, flour smudge on cheek, careful nonchalance." That made me laugh. (:
3JestryAhahah.
That was pretty funny.
I like your random (inner thought) insertions.
"Spinach leaves sticking to forearms, flour smudge on cheek, careful nonchalance." That made me laugh. (:
5/3/2008 c1 9Lily Llynn
Hahaha. The italics are distracting but they kinda work. I like this, it's sweet, and even though it's short, I can tell this is well-written. Cute and hilarious voice. Love found.eventually for suggesting this and you for writing it. Enough talk now, I'll go add it to my c2. (:
9Lily LlynnHahaha. The italics are distracting but they kinda work. I like this, it's sweet, and even though it's short, I can tell this is well-written. Cute and hilarious voice. Love found.eventually for suggesting this and you for writing it. Enough talk now, I'll go add it to my c2. (:
3/18/2008 c1 18found.eventually
Haha. Whoa. I love the narrator's thoughts. The things we do for love. *sigh* Like that time I had to nod and PRETEND my boyfriend can sing. :/ Awful.
Loved it, loved it! :)
18found.eventuallyHaha. Whoa. I love the narrator's thoughts. The things we do for love. *sigh* Like that time I had to nod and PRETEND my boyfriend can sing. :/ Awful.
Loved it, loved it! :)
12/8/2007 c1 6SilverTwilight
This could have turned out to be a mushy romance blurb, but instead it shows the unpleasant sacrifices of love (that in this case taste horrible). Creative and truthful. Good job.
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Dx
6SilverTwilightThis could have turned out to be a mushy romance blurb, but instead it shows the unpleasant sacrifices of love (that in this case taste horrible). Creative and truthful. Good job.
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Dx
10/30/2007 c1 13SamanthaNicole
Oh, the things we do for love. Seriously, I think everyone's pulled this one at least once, be it for a boyfriend, husband, mom, grandma, et cetera. Loved it. And the way you incorporated the narrator's thoughts was hilarious.
Definitely enjoyable.
Cheers,
Sammy
13SamanthaNicoleOh, the things we do for love. Seriously, I think everyone's pulled this one at least once, be it for a boyfriend, husband, mom, grandma, et cetera. Loved it. And the way you incorporated the narrator's thoughts was hilarious.
Definitely enjoyable.
Cheers,
Sammy
10/21/2007 c1 D-Mish
haha hilarious.
also, i went on my friends fanfiction and you had left a review. you gave her some constuctive critism and i would really like that if you could give that to my most recent story since no-one will. ( I dont mean to sounds pushy or anything but i'd really appricate it. :)
anyway love your work!
haha hilarious.
also, i went on my friends fanfiction and you had left a review. you gave her some constuctive critism and i would really like that if you could give that to my most recent story since no-one will. ( I dont mean to sounds pushy or anything but i'd really appricate it. :)
anyway love your work!
8/29/2007 c1 AmorphousHeart
Very cute and amusing. I liked how you integrated the narrator's personal thoughts into the story. Very seamless. Good job!
Very cute and amusing. I liked how you integrated the narrator's personal thoughts into the story. Very seamless. Good job!
8/23/2007 c1 1TheCurrator
*giggles* very cute. Romantic. Ah, the things we do for love... **hums song by 10CC**
1TheCurrator*giggles* very cute. Romantic. Ah, the things we do for love... **hums song by 10CC**
5/9/2007 c2 18Operation Miranda
Very cute concept. I'm interested to see if you'll add anymore to this, because I think it'd be interesting if it were switched up a bit. I mean, I know some girls who are horrible cooks. Maybe a girl cooking for her boyfriend (or husband) would throw in some gender analysis while still showcasing the great diversity amongst couples as the first two chapters seem to do.
18Operation MirandaVery cute concept. I'm interested to see if you'll add anymore to this, because I think it'd be interesting if it were switched up a bit. I mean, I know some girls who are horrible cooks. Maybe a girl cooking for her boyfriend (or husband) would throw in some gender analysis while still showcasing the great diversity amongst couples as the first two chapters seem to do.