for Chaysing Elliot9/2/2021 c28 Guest
Okay look your story is completely and utterly shit. Ther main character girl logic is so idiotic that it hurts my burn like she never thinks any thing though and she’s always the victim in any fight they had. Like when she cheated it was a big deal because he cheated to like you still cheated Dumbass, him doing it doesn’t make it any less worse.
Then like the main character guy you add every single bad thing that a man could have then you also make home the best man you can date like come on make up your fucking mind about the characters personality.
What I’m trying to say is that your story is ass and I know that it’s just some Dumbass 14 year old girl that know nothing about life and writing and I’m giving to much hate on a stupid online fanfic but ready all the reviews about this story being gold is really getting on my nerves. People don’t lie to the writer tell them the truth so they get better not keep on writing shit
Okay look your story is completely and utterly shit. Ther main character girl logic is so idiotic that it hurts my burn like she never thinks any thing though and she’s always the victim in any fight they had. Like when she cheated it was a big deal because he cheated to like you still cheated Dumbass, him doing it doesn’t make it any less worse.
Then like the main character guy you add every single bad thing that a man could have then you also make home the best man you can date like come on make up your fucking mind about the characters personality.
What I’m trying to say is that your story is ass and I know that it’s just some Dumbass 14 year old girl that know nothing about life and writing and I’m giving to much hate on a stupid online fanfic but ready all the reviews about this story being gold is really getting on my nerves. People don’t lie to the writer tell them the truth so they get better not keep on writing shit
1/31/2020 c44 Guest
I just binge read that whole thing after looking for something to um yknow ;) to. But that was a great rollercoaster and I loved it all :))
I just binge read that whole thing after looking for something to um yknow ;) to. But that was a great rollercoaster and I loved it all :))
3/8/2015 c44 
1InsertFakeNameHere
Oh I loved the story! Keep up the good work! ;)
However, and I'm not trying to offend anybody here, I JUST FRICKING HATED CHASYE THRU MOST OF THE STORY! I mean, why would she be such a BITCH?! Even before she was pregnant, she was so whiny and annoying and plain STUPID! Ugh! I know she's fictional and all but what really bugs me is that there are some real people who are just like her! *grrrrrr*
Okay rant over *smiles awkwardly* Sry about that...hehehe *insert emoji with a drop of sweat*
But I still really really really loved the story, maybe more than elliot loves chasye
1InsertFakeNameHereOh I loved the story! Keep up the good work! ;)
However, and I'm not trying to offend anybody here, I JUST FRICKING HATED CHASYE THRU MOST OF THE STORY! I mean, why would she be such a BITCH?! Even before she was pregnant, she was so whiny and annoying and plain STUPID! Ugh! I know she's fictional and all but what really bugs me is that there are some real people who are just like her! *grrrrrr*
Okay rant over *smiles awkwardly* Sry about that...hehehe *insert emoji with a drop of sweat*
But I still really really really loved the story, maybe more than elliot loves chasye
10/2/2013 c44 1Belly boo1099
I just finished reading your story and omg I am crying. When i first started reading this story i just thought it was another teacher-student relationship, i cant beileve how wrong i was. I never would of imagined it to have so much depth, heartbreak, hurt,chaos confusion,love and to be so eventful. But i say this in a good way, as it was a beautiful story that i enjoyed reading. Amazing job creating this lovely story
1Belly boo1099I just finished reading your story and omg I am crying. When i first started reading this story i just thought it was another teacher-student relationship, i cant beileve how wrong i was. I never would of imagined it to have so much depth, heartbreak, hurt,chaos confusion,love and to be so eventful. But i say this in a good way, as it was a beautiful story that i enjoyed reading. Amazing job creating this lovely story
4/14/2013 c27 guest
This story is really bad written. The plot makes no sense. And your characters are so awfully developed. Way to many unecessary drama and fighting. Really baf story
This story is really bad written. The plot makes no sense. And your characters are so awfully developed. Way to many unecessary drama and fighting. Really baf story
3/27/2013 c44 Miss T writing
great story loved the ending but too much drama...
i mean i ended up shutting my laptop off a coulpe of times because there was just too much drama...
great story loved the ending but too much drama...
i mean i ended up shutting my laptop off a coulpe of times because there was just too much drama...
10/27/2012 c44 AnonymousReads
You should make a sequel about Ava or Noah in their tern or adult years. This was a cool plot and chayse is really stupid in the end. Great story. :)
You should make a sequel about Ava or Noah in their tern or adult years. This was a cool plot and chayse is really stupid in the end. Great story. :)
10/21/2012 c2 PrincessD8
Wow, I don't like her mother! If my mom were like that, I think I would have ran away. I like her friend Abbie though. She's a lot like me. The worrier in the friendship. :) Great story so far! Can't wait to read more. :-)
Wow, I don't like her mother! If my mom were like that, I think I would have ran away. I like her friend Abbie though. She's a lot like me. The worrier in the friendship. :) Great story so far! Can't wait to read more. :-)
7/13/2012 c44 9KarmaGetsMeGoing
Hey there! Just came across your story and finished reading ) I have to say though, I'm a bit disappointed that the whole teacher student thing wasn't really the main part of the story. Don't get me wrong though, I thoroughly enjoyed your story very much. Made me tear up towards the end too. It's just that most of the things happening weren't in school so the whole teacher student relationship didn't really even need to be in the plot. All that aside, I enjoyed reading, especially with all the cliffhangers (well, not really cliffhangers anymore, are they?) and the amount of drama - LOTS! I liked the ending alot, how they start over again. Great job! Chayse and Elliot forever! Haha )
9KarmaGetsMeGoingHey there! Just came across your story and finished reading ) I have to say though, I'm a bit disappointed that the whole teacher student thing wasn't really the main part of the story. Don't get me wrong though, I thoroughly enjoyed your story very much. Made me tear up towards the end too. It's just that most of the things happening weren't in school so the whole teacher student relationship didn't really even need to be in the plot. All that aside, I enjoyed reading, especially with all the cliffhangers (well, not really cliffhangers anymore, are they?) and the amount of drama - LOTS! I liked the ending alot, how they start over again. Great job! Chayse and Elliot forever! Haha )
6/18/2012 c44 29Ginbrat
I loved this story. You made me laugh and at the very ending you made me bawl my eyes out I love you so much for making them get together. I loved the ending they reunited like they had first met. 'I'm Elliot,' 'I'm a freaking clumsy loser, but you can call me Chayse.' I loved it have you thought about a sequel to this story? I would definitely read it!
29GinbratI loved this story. You made me laugh and at the very ending you made me bawl my eyes out I love you so much for making them get together. I loved the ending they reunited like they had first met. 'I'm Elliot,' 'I'm a freaking clumsy loser, but you can call me Chayse.' I loved it have you thought about a sequel to this story? I would definitely read it!
2/23/2012 c23 121ShootingStars
OMG! I usually wouldn't review until the end of this story (because it's already completed) but I couldn't help myself after I saw the name of the new dog. Atticus is the name of my six year old Brussels Griffon. I love that you used that name for the new dog!
121ShootingStarsOMG! I usually wouldn't review until the end of this story (because it's already completed) but I couldn't help myself after I saw the name of the new dog. Atticus is the name of my six year old Brussels Griffon. I love that you used that name for the new dog!