for Colors & Light1/15/2007 c1 
16Yeeger
I love the simplicity, yet deeper meaning. And the rhyme scheme was superb.
~Yeeger
16YeegerI love the simplicity, yet deeper meaning. And the rhyme scheme was superb.
~Yeeger
12/9/2006 c1 1J'Adore Les Phoques
I love it! I love the rhyme, the rhythm, and what I think is the deeper meaning. Love it!
LOVE IT!
1J'Adore Les PhoquesI love it! I love the rhyme, the rhythm, and what I think is the deeper meaning. Love it!
LOVE IT!
12/9/2006 c1 Cesalie Chase
So short, yet so amazingly profound! I love the style - the parallel structure of the two stanzas is a nice touch. And that's to say nothing of your beautiful choice of words. Such an awesome way to think about something so simple as color and light...
-Jen
So short, yet so amazingly profound! I love the style - the parallel structure of the two stanzas is a nice touch. And that's to say nothing of your beautiful choice of words. Such an awesome way to think about something so simple as color and light...
-Jen