
6/7/2013 c9 Guest
oh my god I love this..you made my night
oh my god I love this..you made my night
4/14/2011 c15 Jo
Hi,
Know your busy but just had to ask if you plan on finishing this. love the zercan world and am glad one of my favourite authors picked it up. love the plot can't wait to see where your going with is in relation to them meeting other zearcans? kinda don't want that or even if it must happen I wish it occurs after En'u's mom meets their kit but I guess she'll probably know Kaen is an alien byb then.though I must say you seem to be ignoring the bonding aspect of their relationship, they interpret feelings often from facial expressions rather than how they feel.
on a different note I love your stories, Gatekeeper is still my favourite but I must say Dimitri is my most favourite character for absolutely everything, the coversations in his head are just...
sorry this my first review but just discovered this site and thanks for making it worthwhile
Hi,
Know your busy but just had to ask if you plan on finishing this. love the zercan world and am glad one of my favourite authors picked it up. love the plot can't wait to see where your going with is in relation to them meeting other zearcans? kinda don't want that or even if it must happen I wish it occurs after En'u's mom meets their kit but I guess she'll probably know Kaen is an alien byb then.though I must say you seem to be ignoring the bonding aspect of their relationship, they interpret feelings often from facial expressions rather than how they feel.
on a different note I love your stories, Gatekeeper is still my favourite but I must say Dimitri is my most favourite character for absolutely everything, the coversations in his head are just...
sorry this my first review but just discovered this site and thanks for making it worthwhile
10/12/2010 c15
1K Little Red
I honestly kinda wish that this had been completed. I just read the original story, and for the first time noticed the link to this. It's a good story, without a doubt. I wish Kaen would be able to find out about his heritage though, and I wonder how En'u would have the child. I'm guessing C-section. Anyway, lovely story, and congrats on winning in the first place.

I honestly kinda wish that this had been completed. I just read the original story, and for the first time noticed the link to this. It's a good story, without a doubt. I wish Kaen would be able to find out about his heritage though, and I wonder how En'u would have the child. I'm guessing C-section. Anyway, lovely story, and congrats on winning in the first place.
12/12/2009 c15
9Divanora
Well, it appears this story is dead, but it would be awesome if you ever decided to continue it. I'd love to see En'u's mother's reaction to the new news.

Well, it appears this story is dead, but it would be awesome if you ever decided to continue it. I'd love to see En'u's mother's reaction to the new news.
4/12/2009 c15 kAtSki
hey! (",) I just want to say, please continue the story! Please please please.. I'm having a lot of fun reading it and I'm very excited to find out what happens next. It is such an interesting story because mpregs aren't so common on fictionpress (in my opinion) compared to ... And I love how kaen turns into a panther because I am a fan of wild cats too... Though I'm more particularly fond of tigers^^. So please, if ever u find the time, please continue the story. Thank you! .. Oh and I don't have an account here but u can reach me at ^^
hey! (",) I just want to say, please continue the story! Please please please.. I'm having a lot of fun reading it and I'm very excited to find out what happens next. It is such an interesting story because mpregs aren't so common on fictionpress (in my opinion) compared to ... And I love how kaen turns into a panther because I am a fan of wild cats too... Though I'm more particularly fond of tigers^^. So please, if ever u find the time, please continue the story. Thank you! .. Oh and I don't have an account here but u can reach me at ^^
3/25/2009 c15 DefineNightmare
I love you.
xD This story is absolutely amazing! It is a great spin off of the Zerca stories!
please update sooN! I ADORE Kaen, and want to cuddle En'u (without being killed by Kaen, though ^^)
I love you.
xD This story is absolutely amazing! It is a great spin off of the Zerca stories!
please update sooN! I ADORE Kaen, and want to cuddle En'u (without being killed by Kaen, though ^^)
4/28/2008 c15
11BlackWolfCub
This is really good i love it keep going with it please
they have to meet a zercan as otherwise how is en'u going to have the baby without that special tub thing they have?

This is really good i love it keep going with it please
they have to meet a zercan as otherwise how is en'u going to have the baby without that special tub thing they have?
3/29/2008 c15 nittlegrasper
Haha, Kyou, A great story again, but oh my, the Sappyness. I constantly roll my eyes, but of course simultaneously grinning. How come all your characters are so sensitive? Can't the baby's grandmom babysit sometimes? I'dd like to know how the child comes seeing as En'u has no ... you know... baby-escape-orifice.
Anyhoo, don't stop the smex on behalf of the baby, no-no-no *rolls eyes and grins* I wonder how the femaled doctor's taking this all in. REally though, this whole baby thing while schooling is a big issue (Don't kill the story by suggesting abortion, though from the looks of it, that's not how it's heading) Even A woman would have a total life change if she had a baby in high school. Poor En'u ... En'u ...En'u -yup, it is a wierd name to write. Howz it suppose dto be pronounced?
Write more, oh great Kyou!
Haha, Kyou, A great story again, but oh my, the Sappyness. I constantly roll my eyes, but of course simultaneously grinning. How come all your characters are so sensitive? Can't the baby's grandmom babysit sometimes? I'dd like to know how the child comes seeing as En'u has no ... you know... baby-escape-orifice.
Anyhoo, don't stop the smex on behalf of the baby, no-no-no *rolls eyes and grins* I wonder how the femaled doctor's taking this all in. REally though, this whole baby thing while schooling is a big issue (Don't kill the story by suggesting abortion, though from the looks of it, that's not how it's heading) Even A woman would have a total life change if she had a baby in high school. Poor En'u ... En'u ...En'u -yup, it is a wierd name to write. Howz it suppose dto be pronounced?
Write more, oh great Kyou!
3/27/2008 c15
10QueenCasey
Looked on your page, found this story, read said story. Want more of story. Please update it! Please!

Looked on your page, found this story, read said story. Want more of story. Please update it! Please!
3/23/2008 c6 nittlegrasper
Finally got to ch 6, these chapters being surprisingly small for your style, hehehe. Gotta read more, but this week's workload's gonna be a pain in the *.
Finally got to ch 6, these chapters being surprisingly small for your style, hehehe. Gotta read more, but this week's workload's gonna be a pain in the *.
11/28/2007 c4 Kizera
Are you kidding me? you updated and I never got the alert thingy on my e-mail ?...-beats her computer up- BAD comp BAD!...I am so sorry I missed so much but it gave me more to read update soon women :
Are you kidding me? you updated and I never got the alert thingy on my e-mail ?...-beats her computer up- BAD comp BAD!...I am so sorry I missed so much but it gave me more to read update soon women :