
7/31/2010 c6
2InvalidError
Why was this not in my favourites earlier? I love this idea of a secret love friendship their neither wants to admit to! And I'm almost happy to say there's more talking and normalness than gay sex. Not that I don't mind that, of coarse. A lot of he slash fiction on here have gay sex by, like, he fith chapers. This just proves how much awesome-sause this has. This really needs to be updated as soon as possible.

Why was this not in my favourites earlier? I love this idea of a secret love friendship their neither wants to admit to! And I'm almost happy to say there's more talking and normalness than gay sex. Not that I don't mind that, of coarse. A lot of he slash fiction on here have gay sex by, like, he fith chapers. This just proves how much awesome-sause this has. This really needs to be updated as soon as possible.
8/20/2009 c6
8Jessiy
Another fabulishious chappy dreamerdoll! I can't wait for a new updates (I have it on story alert hehe). My birthdays on a Sunday (A week this Sunday so the 30TH Aug) I hope you update then tehe!Much love and admiration Jessiy x

Another fabulishious chappy dreamerdoll! I can't wait for a new updates (I have it on story alert hehe). My birthdays on a Sunday (A week this Sunday so the 30TH Aug) I hope you update then tehe!Much love and admiration Jessiy x
8/20/2009 c5 Jessiy
I've said it before and I'll say it again...ace! Well done. Great characters, how I wish they knew the other loved them! Hehe, *hugs* Jessiy x
I've said it before and I'll say it again...ace! Well done. Great characters, how I wish they knew the other loved them! Hehe, *hugs* Jessiy x
8/20/2009 c4 Jessiy
For this review: Admit I'm cool...haha oj.
Wow! I love your characterisation and it is just overall well written and great. You are cool, like me *grins*.
Well done and a pat on the back Jessiy x
For this review: Admit I'm cool...haha oj.
Wow! I love your characterisation and it is just overall well written and great. You are cool, like me *grins*.
Well done and a pat on the back Jessiy x
8/20/2009 c3 Jessiy
Awesome! The last bit had me laughing, I love jokes...but was it? Hehe. It'a mad how both (I think) like eachother but think the other doesn't good plan. Love it :) 10/10 Jessiy x
Awesome! The last bit had me laughing, I love jokes...but was it? Hehe. It'a mad how both (I think) like eachother but think the other doesn't good plan. Love it :) 10/10 Jessiy x
8/20/2009 c2 Jessiy
Wow! Immensley great and so sweet. These characters seem so real I love them! Well done and 10/1. Jessiy x
Wow! Immensley great and so sweet. These characters seem so real I love them! Well done and 10/1. Jessiy x
8/20/2009 c1 Jessiy
I find their relationship that is there interesting, how you didn't show it start is interesting. I like it, it's unique. A little crazy how they are like this, even if Dam has a girlfriend but I'm sure that will be covered. Great writing style to. 10/10
Jessiy x
I find their relationship that is there interesting, how you didn't show it start is interesting. I like it, it's unique. A little crazy how they are like this, even if Dam has a girlfriend but I'm sure that will be covered. Great writing style to. 10/10
Jessiy x
12/29/2008 c6
2izziexxx
I just found this story (I very much enjoyed it) but sad to see it hasn't been updated in over a year, I always manage to do this, find stories that are discontinued, then the stories i find that aren't discontinued I don't like
I hope very much that this is updated some time soon.

I just found this story (I very much enjoyed it) but sad to see it hasn't been updated in over a year, I always manage to do this, find stories that are discontinued, then the stories i find that aren't discontinued I don't like
I hope very much that this is updated some time soon.
3/13/2008 c6 bluerose24
I really hope that you update this sometime. It is good so far and I want to read more and see what happens.
I really hope that you update this sometime. It is good so far and I want to read more and see what happens.
12/26/2007 c6
4Ashayu
Wow! This is the first story I've ever read here on fictionpress and it's very good!
You must keep writing this! It's awesome!

Wow! This is the first story I've ever read here on fictionpress and it's very good!
You must keep writing this! It's awesome!
11/23/2007 c6
2erasmuss
Blah- Why has this stopped?
:(
Well, I like it a lot. Your charcaters are extremly entertaining, and so far this is a pleasant break from the morbid things I normally read. Actually made me laughat some points.
Anyway. Tis- was good.
I would love tosee it finished one day...

Blah- Why has this stopped?
:(
Well, I like it a lot. Your charcaters are extremly entertaining, and so far this is a pleasant break from the morbid things I normally read. Actually made me laughat some points.
Anyway. Tis- was good.
I would love tosee it finished one day...
10/1/2007 c6
2happy lullaby
This is so good! It's really cute. Please update soon 'cause I can't wait to see what happens!

This is so good! It's really cute. Please update soon 'cause I can't wait to see what happens!