for Life Support5/13/2007 c5 
1False Alarm
A little short, yes, but delightful nonetheless. I can't help absolutely worshipping the way they "joke" on such an intimate level. It has me grinning like a total air-head. Thank God I live alone now so no one needs to see that.
I would say Dam needs to get rid of his girlfriend asap but then again Cale would have nothing to be jealous of and where's the fun in that? So consider me not having said that in case I have in some previous review.
I'm aware that you've updated already a while ago but I couldn't get online for a couple of months. Just to explain why you didn't hear from me sooner. Now, I hope you update soon (I'm not telling you to because I don't think I have the right, being so slow myself).
1False AlarmA little short, yes, but delightful nonetheless. I can't help absolutely worshipping the way they "joke" on such an intimate level. It has me grinning like a total air-head. Thank God I live alone now so no one needs to see that.
I would say Dam needs to get rid of his girlfriend asap but then again Cale would have nothing to be jealous of and where's the fun in that? So consider me not having said that in case I have in some previous review.
I'm aware that you've updated already a while ago but I couldn't get online for a couple of months. Just to explain why you didn't hear from me sooner. Now, I hope you update soon (I'm not telling you to because I don't think I have the right, being so slow myself).
5/8/2007 c5 ks darkstorm
Really love this story. Its awesome. Cant wait for the next chapter. Much love.
Really love this story. Its awesome. Cant wait for the next chapter. Much love.
5/5/2007 c5 4Amindaya
I like this story! I hope you continue with it, and update soon. I love how you show both sides.
4AmindayaI like this story! I hope you continue with it, and update soon. I love how you show both sides.
4/10/2007 c5 23firestar267
Oh my god im so glad its me thats stupid and not you thats slow at updating! After finishing this chapter i thought the published date was the last update date and i got sad :( but then i realised im stupid and now im happy.
on to the actual review...
wow :D i love this =] theyre so sweet together! this is really well written too, i cant wait to see what happens next!
23firestar267Oh my god im so glad its me thats stupid and not you thats slow at updating! After finishing this chapter i thought the published date was the last update date and i got sad :( but then i realised im stupid and now im happy.
on to the actual review...
wow :D i love this =] theyre so sweet together! this is really well written too, i cant wait to see what happens next!
4/8/2007 c5 Orangeena
"If... I wasn’t gay and madly in love with her stepson"
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...
Dam.
TELL HIM.
Tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him.
Goddamnit, just do it.
Anyway. He should totally just grab some huevos and come out to his BEST FRIEND who he loves and will always love him back. Hello.
Or Cale can make a move. Cause we know Dam will be unable to resist the advance. Then we'd be getting somewhere...
Update soon. You're killing me here. ;)
"If... I wasn’t gay and madly in love with her stepson"
...
...
Dam.
TELL HIM.
Tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him tell him.
Goddamnit, just do it.
Anyway. He should totally just grab some huevos and come out to his BEST FRIEND who he loves and will always love him back. Hello.
Or Cale can make a move. Cause we know Dam will be unable to resist the advance. Then we'd be getting somewhere...
Update soon. You're killing me here. ;)
4/6/2007 c5 1Rebel 0ne
I have to say that this is a really good story. I like Dam and Cale... they're too cute together and do really seem like they're meant for each other. However, I'm confused on something... why can't Dam dump his slut? Because his parents will freak? Perhaps its my own reclusive personality but I can't see how a high school boy would really care about what his parents think. Especially when he makes it obvious that he can't stand her. This is your story though and I do really like it. I'm anxious for the next update.
1Rebel 0neI have to say that this is a really good story. I like Dam and Cale... they're too cute together and do really seem like they're meant for each other. However, I'm confused on something... why can't Dam dump his slut? Because his parents will freak? Perhaps its my own reclusive personality but I can't see how a high school boy would really care about what his parents think. Especially when he makes it obvious that he can't stand her. This is your story though and I do really like it. I'm anxious for the next update.
4/3/2007 c5 Cealex
Really interesting story, I really want to see how this develops ^_^ You should try adding a bit more description to make the story more colourful
Looking forward to your next update! :D
Really interesting story, I really want to see how this develops ^_^ You should try adding a bit more description to make the story more colourful
Looking forward to your next update! :D
4/1/2007 c5 1LieLikeAlchemy
Why won't they just admitt that They like each other all ready it would make it so much easier anyway I like it BYE!
1LieLikeAlchemyWhy won't they just admitt that They like each other all ready it would make it so much easier anyway I like it BYE!
3/26/2007 c5 20210403
Ugh, they're so in love with each other! lol If I were there and saw how they acted, I would totally blow their cover- I'm really good at detecting who likes who- as well as who's gay :D.
^^ ~Sei.
Ugh, they're so in love with each other! lol If I were there and saw how they acted, I would totally blow their cover- I'm really good at detecting who likes who- as well as who's gay :D.
^^ ~Sei.
3/26/2007 c3 it really is a REVOLUTION
I went to read Chapter 5 and it was gone! =( Why?
I went to read Chapter 5 and it was gone! =( Why?
3/26/2007 c5 Sarrasanne
omg - the thruthfullness of their situation and like "Inside I choked but outside I was totally cool with it" - that is SO well writtien ^^
luv, Sa
omg - the thruthfullness of their situation and like "Inside I choked but outside I was totally cool with it" - that is SO well writtien ^^
luv, Sa