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1/13/2007 c1 145BellonaFlayreRiver
Nothing is always way too much for me too. i really like the last line.. it really makes the reader go "OW YOU HIT ME WITH THAT AMAZING LINE OF AMAZINGNESS!"

lovely.
1/2/2007 c1 134emeraude-irlandais
Sleep is fascinating, and captured passingly well in this piece. "The walls expanded outward,/room for flying in" is probably my favorite, for the opposites (outward/in) and the poetic accuracy. Some of the wording was awkward, but the beginning was magnificent, especially "navy edged darkness". Looking forward to reading more by you. :) `~bella~`
12/11/2006 c1 105Maggot Blood
Great poem I like it alot good job.

Wolf.

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