for Nothing1/13/2007 c1 
145BellonaFlayreRiver
Nothing is always way too much for me too. i really like the last line.. it really makes the reader go "OW YOU HIT ME WITH THAT AMAZING LINE OF AMAZINGNESS!"
lovely.
145BellonaFlayreRiverNothing is always way too much for me too. i really like the last line.. it really makes the reader go "OW YOU HIT ME WITH THAT AMAZING LINE OF AMAZINGNESS!"
lovely.
1/2/2007 c1 134emeraude-irlandais
Sleep is fascinating, and captured passingly well in this piece. "The walls expanded outward,/room for flying in" is probably my favorite, for the opposites (outward/in) and the poetic accuracy. Some of the wording was awkward, but the beginning was magnificent, especially "navy edged darkness". Looking forward to reading more by you. :) `~bella~`
134emeraude-irlandaisSleep is fascinating, and captured passingly well in this piece. "The walls expanded outward,/room for flying in" is probably my favorite, for the opposites (outward/in) and the poetic accuracy. Some of the wording was awkward, but the beginning was magnificent, especially "navy edged darkness". Looking forward to reading more by you. :) `~bella~`