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4/6/2008 c1 4xLilly White
Captivating, delicate and delicious. :) I don't usually read poetry, but this one has an ongoing rhythm that gradually unfurls and whose pulsations are pleasure to feel, and all the lines seem to cling to one another whilst meandering into metaphors and imagery that are frosty and perfectly written. :) What can I say? This is a really touching piece- and I like it when simple scenes are painted out with such lovely colours and sensations, as you did quite skillfully.

Looking forward to reading more of your work :) Take care!
9/5/2007 c1 18Rose Valentine
I loved this prose!
2/5/2007 c1 66borderline-mary
Good lord, that was lovely. It was so evocative, and lyrical; I'm at loss for words. There was a lot of emotion behind this, and it ended right where it ought.

Nothing short of gorgeous.
1/8/2007 c1 EnigmaticArsenic
oh... eerie. so very nice- it's almost like a cross between poe and frost, the almost lyrical narrative blending in with the theme of winter. i got chills... but my room is cold. XD
12/12/2006 c1 73Jezsh
Chilling and fascinating, I loved this!

The language is utterly gorgeous.
12/12/2006 c1 59Frore
ajkraejklgljkljkjksjkgjk!

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Sweet mother of Frost!

You just like, took a whip, and snapped out the eyes of every other writer in the just in section, a whip of pure fucking ice, an ice whip, a literary fucking ice whip.

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