for Paradise12/13/2006 c1 
6The Freckled One
Wow! I really like that. Does it have a tune?
Hear me sing on my site: eleanordaley.tk
6The Freckled OneWow! I really like that. Does it have a tune?
Hear me sing on my site: eleanordaley.tk
12/12/2006 c1 Ajna
I love your descriptions here, they're amazing and provide great, vivid mental images. Also, I love the lines
"And she sings to the rain
And she sings to the stars..." etc.
they are a nice and beautiful break from the other stanzas. Great poem!
I love your descriptions here, they're amazing and provide great, vivid mental images. Also, I love the lines
"And she sings to the rain
And she sings to the stars..." etc.
they are a nice and beautiful break from the other stanzas. Great poem!