for The Necromancer's Daughter1/15/2007 c3 
6Torngari
I actually read through this quite a few times to try and find something helpfull...I failed. Your diction is awsome, and you really have a great opening here. I shall be reading on.
6TorngariI actually read through this quite a few times to try and find something helpfull...I failed. Your diction is awsome, and you really have a great opening here. I shall be reading on.
1/15/2007 c3 17Without A Muse
Oh. Spooky ending! But, I really like it how you've given everything a mysterious feel to it. And, at the end of each chapter, someone dies. Very nice touch.
17Without A MuseOh. Spooky ending! But, I really like it how you've given everything a mysterious feel to it. And, at the end of each chapter, someone dies. Very nice touch.
1/14/2007 c1 Teigar-Olivia
i like it alot! i dont necessarily like the name cina... maybe something like iirisel ? well, i think it's very interesting! it's great!
i like it alot! i dont necessarily like the name cina... maybe something like iirisel ? well, i think it's very interesting! it's great!
1/10/2007 c2 Without A Muse
Yeah! You update! *ish so proud* Just a little stranger...
Anyhoo, I really liked it! The ending was a little creepy, *shivers* but made me want to turn the page (or click the next button, whichever works...), and read what happens next.
I liked the rock part as well!
You're just really good at writing!
Yeah! You update! *ish so proud* Just a little stranger...
Anyhoo, I really liked it! The ending was a little creepy, *shivers* but made me want to turn the page (or click the next button, whichever works...), and read what happens next.
I liked the rock part as well!
You're just really good at writing!
1/10/2007 c2 9Alteng
Well, that was good a weird. The last bit was really fun, and the invader/murderer reminds me of the cartoon "Darkwing Duck" in a negative sort of way, mind you.
As for Cina, I don't know what to say. Maybe it is all connected here, and Master Tine was not suppose to die at this time. Only you know.
9AltengWell, that was good a weird. The last bit was really fun, and the invader/murderer reminds me of the cartoon "Darkwing Duck" in a negative sort of way, mind you.
As for Cina, I don't know what to say. Maybe it is all connected here, and Master Tine was not suppose to die at this time. Only you know.
1/8/2007 c2 Counting Petals
I love that last sentence. Just something about that image of something being drizzled in blood...
I love that last sentence. Just something about that image of something being drizzled in blood...
1/8/2007 c1 Counting Petals
Gosh darnit, you've gotten me hooked.
Cina seems a little...odd. But that's a good thing, it'll make her much more interesting. I love the name, by the way.
Sea shells! Yay! I love the ocean!
Gosh darnit, you've gotten me hooked.
Cina seems a little...odd. But that's a good thing, it'll make her much more interesting. I love the name, by the way.
Sea shells! Yay! I love the ocean!
12/15/2006 c1 Alteng
Okay, I read this yesterday morning. There isn't much here to make a judgement. Cina seems to be a strange girl, but this all has to do with father's lovely profession. I guess I would be a bit off too in her position.
There is some mystery brewing here, though with unseen eyes watching.
Okay, I read this yesterday morning. There isn't much here to make a judgement. Cina seems to be a strange girl, but this all has to do with father's lovely profession. I guess I would be a bit off too in her position.
There is some mystery brewing here, though with unseen eyes watching.
12/13/2006 c1 3Crimson Orchard
Interesting story-very original, though Cina does remind me of a character in a novel I've read before...however, the plot is still not fully revealed so I guess I know nothing. Over all, Good job, keep writing.
~Suna
3Crimson OrchardInteresting story-very original, though Cina does remind me of a character in a novel I've read before...however, the plot is still not fully revealed so I guess I know nothing. Over all, Good job, keep writing.
~Suna