3/15/2012 c26 the truth
The truth is that is one of the only books/stories that ever made me cry, it was a awesome (exepcet when you know). That is the truth.

6/17/2009 c26 kiwishae
Hey

I beleve that if you added more detail about how she felt when she was killing the people and what was going through her Mind it wold be better. I also think that when she was moving from the hospital to living withrob or when she wennt back home to sappsidly her das "mike" that you should clarify who it is because it was confusing and when they were talking about how mike was messing with the fiels that you could clear it up some. And whowas her biological father mike or rob? But that's just some of my views on how you cold male it Betterand. COuld you write tue views on what her Friends and familly thought about the Book when they read it . That Could go in tue Boom of you published it. also maybe you in the story you cold say that they published it to like warn people that this happens so dont judge people of Make fun of them because you don't know what there going through. Sorry if the spelling and the words look weired when you read this I'm typeing it from my sisters I pod

3/10/2009 c25 HOCKEYpuc220022
Very interesting!

I liked how you ended it by connecting everything with the kidnapping.

P.S. I think you mean raping instead of rapping, 'cuz rapping is like the type of music.

1/6/2009 c23 Lady Riss
Well, there it is. I was waiting for Zach to go sour.

1/5/2009 c21 Lady Riss
I was reading this and I was like, "yay! Rei, lied to me, this will end well!" then I read the last line. Darn.

Anyway, I enjoyed the nice break ;) lol

1/5/2009 c19 Lady Riss
You need to spell check.

It is "raped" not "rapped" and some consider the mistake very disrespectful.

9/7/2008 c15 Lady Riss
They are related, that is just disgusting. If Mike knew he was her real father, why the HELL did he rape her? He's just sick like that?

And Rob. He seems like an okay (O, Lord...seriously?) kinda guy... Would he still be taking showers WITH her? I mean, worse come to worse, can't he just stand outside the shower or something?